Black Poetry : The Enigma of ApAtHy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, Mar 6, 2007.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once friend, 2wice foe
    Bond broken, let it go
    Blood of brothers spills and splatters...
    Some ish don't matter

    Rocks thrown, hands hid
    Convincing lies, God forbid
    Vultures and crows start to gather
    Some ish don't matter

    Soldiers march, children die
    Fathers grieve, mothers cry
    Babylon's Jesus disguises laughter:sleep:
    Some ish don't matter

    No glove or love
    Down low or up above
    Diseases spread faster
    Some ish don't matter

    Lying books, Lying preachers
    Fake students, Faker teachers
    THE MISUNDERSTOOD "EVER AFTER"
    Some ish don't matter

    Words read, not understood
    Reply, say it was good
    I'll still write another chapter
    Some ish don't matter!
     
  2. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice write.
    I could feel the emotion in this!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely felt the depth of this piece where it do matter
     
  4. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This "ish" righ here matters.

    Bless up, writer. This was on point.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hi: poet, good to see ya on the boards again.
    Everything we are and do...matters, nice drop poet.
     
  6. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam.
    The love u all show keeps my pen flowing!!!!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enigmatic will thrust the mind into understanding... keep it up!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The more we ignore, the more it matters, for the problem only becomes larger. Thank you for giving us reason to pause and ponder.
     
  9. 4g0tt3n_Canc3r

    4g0tt3n_Canc3r Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice im feeling ya flow- keep it goin


    Cancer*
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown:

    honestly there's not enough mics in the world for a voice like yours.
    i mean that.

    still twin,
    cdlm.
     
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