Black Poetry : The End...

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  1. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Searching through the endless multitudes hoping to find the one who held the key.
    There you stood, my knight in “shiny” armor . And in your possession I found a bronze key
    Though I was told to be in search of the one who held the golden key, for not another would do. I over looked that and saw that you had all the qualities That I so longed for and desired. Slowly but surly, you began to come out of your armor and I saw you In the flesh, you were beautiful, the tall, dark, and handsome type. I then, slowly but surly came out of my priestly rags and let you see me in all my nakedness. Unclothed, I stood before you, and I let you enter my inner parts. And one day I somehow came to the reality that you were the one. But one thing was stopping us from future that I was so certain would come, you didn’t hold the Golden Key to which unlocked my heart. But I bypassed the truth and I pressed on and pursued you. But on the eve of one day, I was shocked by a rude awakening, for I was not the only damsel that you had …”WOOED”…both astonished and dumbfounded , I put my priestly garments back on and went back On the endless search for the one who held the Golden key. THE END…..
     
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    Hello and Welcome MzMelanie2u2 :wave:

    Thank you for sharing your poetry with us! It's beautiful work and we do look forward to reading everything you care to share with us ... but you can't join us, posting lots of your own work without reading and giving love to the other poets.

    Please refrain from filling the page up with your own work, and give some love to the work already here.

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  3. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearthis: ...Glad you enjoyed the poetry...and thank you for the heads up...much love to you...1 :kiss1:
     
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    this was sweet and full of compassion love the vibe of this piece
     
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    I love this allegory!

    May your quest be fulfilled. :rain: