Black Poetry : The End Of The Day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, May 21, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE END OF THE DAY
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    At the end of the day
    Wipe away your tears
    Put away old fears
    As tomorrow nears

    By the break of day
    We've cut our loss
    Consigned the cross
    Let doze...((go off))

    There will always be
    That bill delayed ~
    Sin to weigh
    Ends to pay

    In these last of days
    New dawn begun
    Here comes...
    The Son,
    It's done!


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003 :heart:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice...like the subject too....

    ~lovely~
     
  3. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful...liked the way you released
     
  4. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice flow...

    :thanks: for sharing

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