Black Poetry : -the end of the begining of freedom -

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the end of the begining of freedom -

    this is the end of the begining of freedom
    cuz i cant never be FREE
    or wait... can i....?
    naw... cuz even iof they paid me to
    b a puppet
    to the system
    dancing
    praising him
    cuz i am "free"
    talking like im "free" acting like im "free"
    it would work....
    it jus wouldnt.. cuz id still be a slave
    a prsioner
    id still be on lock down for being late
    cuz im being held hostage by time
    time would still control me even if the government tried to pay me
    to pretend
    but i dont mind.. time...
    cuz hopefully it will one day whip me in shape...
    and keep me here looking great
    i gots to appreciate it cuz it lets me love my family every day
    only when the end of mines
    time arrives will i truely be free
    wandering around for eterity
    limitless
    ill float FREE....
     
  2. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here is another great poem
    Daroc, your poems emit such a wisdom
    about the way things are
    and they are so on target
    i just can't help but get mesmerized by what
    you're tryin to say

    thank you, for once again, opening my mind. :read: :teach:
     
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    Muse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa this was solidity in motion (aint that somethin' ;)) i really enjoyed this rhythm....your pen is blessed I really like your style!

    -Muse
     
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    I almost logged off and I caught this one. Glad I didn't miss it. I can tell you are passionate about this series. Great flow, Daroc.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey now this was tight...enjoyed the series
     
  6. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall the love is so much appreciated.. and thanks fo staying along da ride so long hopefully my expressions of freddom got yall thinkin.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome meaningful flowz of freedommmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!
    love every one it was on point ....poet of the week scribing tyte
     
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