Black Poetry : The Enchanting Negress

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  1. garlicsalt99

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    The Enchanting Negress
    (daughters of Eve)

    It all started with the rib. When God saw that the first man was by
    himself, he said "it is not good that man should be alone." So he caused
    the first man to go into a deep sleep, took a rib from him, and formed her,
    a work of art unparalleled by the most talented of artist even until this day;
    Eve, the mother of all mankind. She was beautiful beyond description.
    She became the focus of the first mans love, second only to God; so much so
    that when Eve was deceived into yielding to temptation, the first man, Adam,
    willingly followed, knowing the warning that was told to him. When they
    both gave in to the object of their detrimental enticement and fell out of
    fellowship with God, their eyes were open to a strange, new beauty;
    each others nakedness. Strange enough for them to want to promptly cover
    themselves, but beautiful enough for them to want to look upon, and
    experience the physical differences they saw in each other. He was alluring
    to her; she was enchanting and attractive to him.
    Looking at the tapestry of humanity I can see Gods divine craftsmanship
    in the wide spectrum of brown; ranging from light tan, to caramel brown, to
    chocolate brown, to ebony black, all of whom posses an eye catching sheen,
    and an enamoring wit. Blessed with melanin, to varying degrees, and a
    colorful fascination that keeps a mans eye, she is in undisputed totality,
    all woman; and all women of color are her. In her, is that something that
    appeals to the love and compassion that is within my gender, and also to
    the baseness, lust, and passions that are a deep seeded part of man. She
    is the Enchanting Negress. The daughter of Eve; enticing to all who look
    upon her.
    As is part of her nature, her charm is unmatched by anything ever
    imagined; that which is an integral part of her being. The sound of her
    voice is relaxation to the ears, and the sight of her,... OH! the sight of
    her is an optical massage to any man who just happens to take a glance in
    her direction. Her touch is sugar to the body; sweeter than any sugar ever
    tasted. She is the ultimate inscent, sweetening the air with cocoa butter
    scented pheromones that subconsciously drives a brotha up the wall. Her
    kiss is chocolate , her neck is caramel, and her paps taste of hot cocoa,
    as we ravage each other in the heat of passion. Her charm is temptation,
    and surcoming to it seems to be the only natural recourse.
    Among her many attributes, the daughter of Eve is very sensual, very
    sultry,... very sexual. She is sensual in that she appeals to al of the
    senses; she looks good, she sounds good, she smells good, she feels good,...
    she tastes good. Her hot bloodedness and strong will is what makes her
    sultry. She is alive with attitude, and is animated like the ebony flame
    that she is. In her purest physical form, she is beautiful; visually
    compelling. My eyes work their way down from the eyes which are set in an
    enchanting face, to the smooth neck-line and dainty shoulders, to the full
    bosom, to the slendering waist-line with the enticing navel as its center
    piece, amidst a toned abdomen, to the buffed brown hips rounded out by a
    firm, taut buttocks, to the sleek and toned thighs, to the smooth solid
    legs, all the way down to the feet; everything bare, everything elegant,...
    everything lovely. I gently grab her by the waist and bring her close to
    me, and kiss her neck and forehead. I whisper sweet nothings in her ear
    and she whispers sweeter things back as we hold each other in a warm embrace.
    Hers isn't a sexuality of mere intercourse, but of a total interface of
    passion, feeling, and emotion,... two become one.
    It should not go without saying that the daughter of Eve is intelligent,
    which makes her more enchanting. Her intuition and rationale is keen, and
    her wit is astounding. Her articulation and expression is both strong and
    sweet to observe. Out of the fire of will and determination was forged the
    shades of brown that are feminine, bold, and beautiful. Well endowed with
    brilliance and charm, she can defeat the strongest of men without using a
    muscle; the complex combination of beauty and clever-wit is her strength.
    She is every woman, and all women are her. She is intelligent;
    brilliant, and has been throughout the time of humanity. She is beautiful;
    desirable to those who take notice. She is charming and enamoring; she
    speaks without saying a word. She is the wide spectrum of brown, the
    Enchanting Negress, the daughter of Eve; one to hold forever.

    Written by: K. Charles
    (c) 1998
     
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    GarlicSalt ... WoW!

    What a lovely way to enter a room!
    So glad to have you here. Thanks for coming.
    Thank you for this beautiful tribute to me
    and all my Sisters!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    GS welcome wit ya bad self
    ya masterful flow sho
    get it laid out bru.
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee,

    To you and all the beautiful black sista's everywhere,... you're welcome.


    To the poetic master,.... right right.
     
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    how did i miss this deep drop wow !!!!
    awesome scribing poet
     
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    RICH, I thought this sunk to the bottom of the thread. I'm glad that you resurected this piece :)
     
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    word up , i'm good at the lost and found....lol
    most welcome brother
     
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