Quiet Poetry Lounge : the empirical truth

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IfUComeSoftly, Jul 10, 2006.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i witheld as long as possible
    denied you at all costs
    digressed at every turn
    however the truth always
    comes to the light
    my coup de grace
    came in the realization
    of affection and destiny
    honestly mi carino
    you are my wealth
    avaricious for you
    you pulsate within me
    the cadence is hypnotic
    made submissive by
    the swaying of your soul
    archaetype of my king
    epitome of greatness
    open yourself to me
    as i have opened to you
    the culmination of adoration
    awaits you and only you
    truly king you are my blessing
    the birth of serenity
    lies in the palm of my
    open and wanting hand
    the empirical proof
    is on the other side
    of your somewhat
    cynical yet luminous heart
    the empirical proof is
    that love begets truth
    truth begets love
    and love begets you
    all that you dare to dream
    is waiting in the palm
    of my open hand

    Take it...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pass me your hand ......this was awesome
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww.. thanks for the love rich... i still don't know how you manage to spread so much love and drop hotness all the time... i dont' know how.. but i'm working on it... lol
     
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    u doing well to me now give me your hand honey !
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you miss the warmth of my hand?

    lol.. thank you for the love rich..

    softly
     
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    likewise and anytime peace unto u sis.
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    amazing...simply amazing...just as real as it comes...

    wish it were for me...
    my pen runs dry...
     
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    and that hand will hold,
    the brothers beautiful mind control.
    that only grasps a hold,
    because it isn't he that controls.................nor you

    BUT THE BOTH OF YOU...

    very interesting, you've got another fan now!
     
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