Black Poetry : The email that cried!Part I

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I met you when I was 13 and you were 15.
    And you were the first boy/man I kissed.
    Three years of togetherness.
    Then you were off for Uncle Sam...
    Didn't take me to the Prom, found
    another date...neither of us was in the mind
    that we should sit and wait.
    See I was off to college, you to see the world
    to me I was a woman, but to you I was still
    a girl.
    Through the years we've both replayed this
    drawn out love affair.
    But most of it we romanticized cause I was
    here and you were there.
    But you always seem to find me, no matter
    where I might be.
    Bringing back long forgotten memories that
    sometimes I don't want to relive or see.
    You wooed me when I was 21 with my education
    fully done.
    But, unbeknownst to me, when you were on
    bended knee
    You had married another before me.
    You forgot to tell me!
    That you had not yet divorced...of course!
    I had to let you go!
    Ten years later we were involved again
    you were then just my special friend.
    So much more, but we just ignored it.
    Now I am past 40, and happily living
    my life. Then I get this e-mail that has caused
    me this mental strife...
    You know the right things to say.
    Got me thinking that way.
    But...This email is crying...
    out to me!
    AND MY EYES LEAKED IN RETURN...
    BJS(C)2001
     
  2. charleshandy

    charleshandy Active Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot: :hot: :love: :love: :love:can i have more
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is more to come!

    Oh no doubt as I labor in my lab, I shall have formulated for the part 2. Thanks for reading!
    BLESSINGS TO YA HOUSE
     
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    I like this one, MsB! It hit home. There's always at least one who keeps coming back like a recurring dream/nightmare (whatever the case may be). Who do they think they are?

    Much :heart:
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ddaayyyuuummmmmm

    Honey CHil'
    I thought it was just me ! there is always that one that keeps turning up like a bad penny !!!!

    anxiously awaiting the sequal to this Saga

    do the two long time sweethearts reunite to finally get it right .....
    Stay Tuned ! only msluciousb can tell us fo so; :D
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies I thanks ya!

    For feeling me with no condemnation. For sharing this unfolding drama and always there with a pat on the back no matter what this whacky lady does!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    :jumping:Well I'm waiting for PartII:::D

    this is good...:jumping:
    and i like the style...
    :)

    Cheers to the Best Mystery Poem!!!
    :toast:

    :D
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PART TWO ALREADY POSTED!

    Somewhere down the board you will see it.
    I completed part two in the wee hours of the morning!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    mslusciousb,
    i like this poetic document of your love life.

    p.s
    ladies don't act like y'all ain't never run back to your man :D
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One correction...FYI, HE'S DOING THE RUNNING

    I often write about what is happening to me...
    Not only is there a message there is therapy.
    Women need to know as they search through life that
    forgiving a man is not a sin. Unless the same indescretions
    are repeated. Secondly you got it wrong J'hai , I am not
    running back to, he is seeking me out and if we should
    decide to try again...It will be a mutual committment.
    None of that come running back stuff, like I am not capable
    of existing without someone. I already got two in play.
    YOU MISSED SOMETHING...GO BACK AND READ
    "Where is your heart?"
    Not fussing, just saying!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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