Black Poetry : The Email That Cried Part 2

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I told part of the story
    but I want to be sure and
    get it right, cause best
    believe I am sending the
    brother a copy of my thoughts
    before the end of the night!
    Now the beauty of this dillema
    Is he is in another state as long
    as he doesn't touch me, I think
    I will be all right.

    But the moment that he shoud kiss me
    I will weaken at the knee's and forget
    That there are other's for whom I have
    to be concerned.
    Never had multiple pursuers, I am not
    good at this game.
    Causing emotinal pain is just unacceptable
    in my brain.
    He went on in the email, about how his life
    has change, I knew my prayers had been
    answered because that is what I prayed
    for through all these years...and tears
    that flood my key board.
    With lyrics from our favorite artist posted
    boldly on his page
    He cannot understand my confusion
    And somewhat of a rage.
    How dare you come back now when I
    just made up my mind we would never
    be...
    The Email cried...It cried for me!
    I was glad, cause now he is a Preacher,
    hope he is doing better than the priest
    at keeping temptation at bay.
    And I am sure he is looking for a wife.
    OH GOD WHY DID YOU SEND HIM MY WAY?
    The email spoke of dreams deffered, and
    why I never heard a word.
    How he felt now that he was worthy and
    has material things to offer me...
    That makes everything better.
    He did all this with an electronic letter...
    Keys stroking my heart...
    The falling away of the brick wall around
    my heart
    Erected specially for he!
    The email cried..."It cried for me"?
    bjs (C)2002
     
  2. charleshandy

    charleshandy Active Member MEMBER

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    thats cooled i like that piece very realistic you are natural may others be guided by your footsteps that you may leave behind
    love your work and thanks for reading my piece check out the rest of my work my favorite surrender to the lord
     
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    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I believe he is crying for himself...don't reply!
    But that's just my humble opinion....truth
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thank you both for reading Sista Mysteria, "waiting on the lord to tell me what to do"...but feeling you.
    Mr. Charles, thank you I shall indeed go back and check out your work for sure.
    Thanks for your advice and encouragement!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK! LADIES HERE IT IS!
     
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    Ms. Lady... this the dha bomb.. and i seriously mean dha bomb. I 'm just sittin here like... Man.. this deep.. this some serious stuff... Well I'll pray for you... and I wish you good Luck!!! :D

    P.S. Let me know if their is a part 3!!!
    ;)
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't see how not!

    Let me say ! It appears that romance and mystery writing
    are my forte , something happened I was moved to write
    about it, which you know took some guts. How can I not
    let you know how it ends...He is coming for a visit soooon!
    Go back and read "Where is your Heart"!
    I been praying girl, but I was also playing, I asked God to
    do some rearranging and one week after I wrote that poem, this started eating at me when fellow number three popped back on the scene...I don't use Pheremones and I have no special tricks!
    (that I am sharing anyway)...But, the fact that this is evolving into something that I can include in my book.."DIARY OF A BIGG BUTT WOMAN"(ALL RIGHTS RESERVED copywrittten Shepherd Production 2000)
    The book is in editing and rewrite so this is a gift from God and a challenge from Life!
    THANKS FOR READING
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...this piece, i am lovin' so. i agree, God will show you the way and that's all i am going to say bout' tHaT! scribe on ma sista', you already know that yo poetry is therapy...that's what i always say.
     
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    Wow!!!

    hoping that all that you desire is what God also desires for you. Everything happens for a reason.

    :heart: Aminata
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Aminata!

    My thoughts exactly! If you read "Where is your heart really?"
    it is a most prophetic piece of work for me...both as an artist
    and writer and a woman. I believe as you say that everything
    happens for a reason..."In all thy ways acknowledge him..."
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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