Black Poetry : The edge of tommorrow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, May 21, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Standing on the edge of tomorrow
    High above the fear of what might be
    Arms stretched wide
    Head flung back
    A smile of anticipation on my face
    As I breathe deeply I can smell
    The warmth of yesterdays past
    I am ready
    For whatever the day might hold
    New love
    Found money
    Renewed faith
    I close my eyes
    And take the first step
    That will take me
    Over the edge of tomorrow
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tomorrow is always a brand new day filled with possibilities, and that is just amazing.

    Thanks for the scribe
     
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    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    get the steppin!

    Very nice Piece! definately felt this I'm ready to start my march!
     
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    YES! YES! YES! YES!

    I'm going to have a great day tomorrow...starting with today. Thanks for the inspiration.

    BE
     
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    Natasha!

    Your words are moving me to make deliberate, positive steps toward peace and happiness this day!

    thank you

    a
     
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    how wonderful it is to fall into the embrace of faith...this is a wondeful peace....
     
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    Let it Flow!

    I breathed deeply and I savored the arome--well done poet--Amun-Ra
     
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