Black Poetry : The Edge of My Love....

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've come close
    to knowing my intentions
    You've moved next
    to flowing within my dimensions
    You're almost there
    But let me make you aware
    that you are merely on the edge of
    my love
    To truly know, you have to actually
    experience each and every 300 seconds
    (that's 5 minutes baby) of that kiss, factually
    You may think that you can envision it all
    but the image that you see
    cannot compare to the tears of joy that fall
    when I visually capture you, painting me
    You have neared the experience
    but until you actually share my caress
    as we painstakingly undress
    each others layers of caution
    peeling away eons
    of distrust
    and years
    of fears
    As we bathe one another in this naked purity
    of all our senses
    It will leave us exposed
    and raw...
    Yet, loved....
    Quite blessed am I for the "me" that you've already saw.
    And darling, I truly feel what you have already seen.
    But there is so much more
    than a notion
    in store....
    So until you experience all of the above
    You are but merely on the edge of my love...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwww at the edge
    this was smoothly laid out
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich for taking time to scribe about this vibe.
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Definately a scribe of all scribes. Makes one want to take head....learn lessons of love indeed.

    Peace, Power and Prosperity
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow enchants for the hell of it, and is helluva good!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy to know you enjoyed Afrostotle, thank you for that, and nice to see your face in the place.
    Yea, it was one of those "well why not?" kind of scribes, thank you brotha 1poet.
     
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