Black Poetry : The Ecstacy Effect

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Mar 21, 2002.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Suicide Tuesday
    came and went today
    without me having
    to wonder about how it
    would affect you~
    I'll never have to wonder
    about it again
    instead
    I'll feel the pain
    of a Manic Monday~
    when you didn't wake up
    in your bed
    in fact you didn't
    wake up at all~
    all I got was a call
    to let me know
    you were gone~
    your life was over~
    your death was the after effect
    of chasing that illusive high
    you search for every now and again
    when you dance with danger
    partnered by a little white pill~
    this time you soared
    high enough
    to reach the sky~
    and I didn't even get to
    K
    I
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    S
    Y
    O
    U
    G
    O
    O
    D
    B
    Y
    E

    (C) nfn 2002
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana,

    Girl! I missed reading you.
    You do this scribing thangy so well.
    Reading you is like Whoa!


    Bring It On Poetess! :)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    whoooa

    i felt it all the way up in here :heart:

    pd
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana

    I miss your unique power in wordz...this one is ....
    un-describe-able ....period.

    peace
    g-man
     
  5. j'hiah

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    whoa

    haven't read you in a while but you still keep it thorough..

    thought provoking and great piece.

    nfinite.
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    KT.


    i've always told you that your work has a way of
    making me... feel. each&every word. this piece
    was no exception. thank you for sharing!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    K,

    Thanks for allowing this read!!!

    Waaaay deep and felt!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  8. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep scribe here!@!

    Thanks for sharing!!
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco..thanx for missin me...you know how much I appreciate you always stopping by..brings a smile to my face every time:)

    pd..thanx for feelin what I had to say..this is one problem that's not gonna go away anytime soon...

    Sherry...so true your words...they constantly are under the impression that it won't happen to them..how wrong they are..
    when they just keep pushin the limits...

    G-Man...thank you...I watched a program where they showed a teenager dying on camera, and it still wasn't enough to make other teenagers seriously think about giving ecstacy up...so I guess there's only one option left open to them...sad but true...

    J'hiah...many thanks..if just one person stops to think..then it's a start...it's no innocent little party pill..

    Ga..you know I know you feel my work and I appreciate you always supporting it..you know that right;)

    GQ..thanks for reading me and letting me enter your thoughts, for a space in time...

    Rashad...much appreciated..thanks for stoppin by

    k
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yo sis....... dis was tyght and flowed out so smoovee!!!
    i love it when u just flow
     
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