Black Poetry : The Earth Cries For You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blackchynadoll, Jul 22, 2003.

  1. blackchynadoll

    blackchynadoll Member MEMBER

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    As they lower you deep in the dirt
    A single tear falls from the sky
    There is nothing now, to shelter my hurt
    While our memories form behind my eye

    As I lie in my bed, and you in your grave
    The moon seems to hold your stiaring face
    And while each raindrop tear disappears in a wave
    the sky screams as clouds embrace

    Trees bend in agony, their leaves writher in pain
    Fierce ocean arms dragging down to their depths
    Your storm ravages the Earth to leave it never the same
    Since your legacy ended after those fatal few steps

    Now dew coats the earth
    Her remaining of the mourning
    As to the sun the sky gives birth
    It seems she's done mourning
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was smooth flowing
    ya pen has so much to say
    let da ink drop
    very nice
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have the mournful heart of a poet.

    I love the expressions of your heartbeat!
     
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    Hey blackchynadoll
    feeling you deep
    on this flow
    much love
    Peace
     
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    This was truly felt, deep in the heart...
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well done.
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mourning never sounded so beautiful
     
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