Black Poetry : **THE DYNASTY OF A HO**

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tha Truth can't be sugacoated..


    I blow my nose yo
    In ya dolla bills ho
    Cas you been pimpin' me for years
    and now you gotta go

    Pimpin' my heart, mind and sunlight of my soul
    Are pimps up?
    I say NO
    You cant be CEO
    of my life
    No mo' No mo'
    Cas now you gotta Roll

    Im puttin' my foot down
    taking back my Queen Control
    Control of Who I Am
    A worth you often stole
    Ya icy cold...

    But for you, I melt no more
    Cas ya words live in my core
    But I cry to sleep no more
    I said cry to sleep no more
    Left my spleen out on the floor
    As you walked around with yours
    I said walked around with yours
    No one knew me behind closed..
    Doors.


    (You have some nerve Pimp..)


    Letting your Queen sit on tha ground
    As you smirk, with a tilted crown
    Smilin' like, a crimson clown
    On your throne my voice had no...
    Sound.


    (No sound Pimp)


    But the HO machine is down
    And This Queen has found her sound
    And This Queen has found her voice
    And This Queen's on solid ground
    And she's stompin' all thru your town
    Taking back Her misplaced crown
    Standing under the Flashin' Lights
    Sippin' Wine in tha candle light
    Reining ova this Milk and Honey
    Dismissin' you..and yo money
    No longer on tha ground face down
    Sittin' in your old throne....Mine Now
    Mine Now.

    And it feels [email protected] good here
    Tha airs real clean, and tha sky's real....clear
    And I just bought me a platinum mirror
    So I can marvel at my majesty without no...
    Fears...


    I dont fear you pimp


    So dont bring yo ho-less @ss to sit
    On tha crushed velvet of my pulpit
    Cas you ain't gettin' none of this Milk and Honey
    Now get out there... and Make My Money
    And why is it that ya nose is lookin' kinda runny
    Is it these ice chips ya receiven from me
    And where does a homeless pimp now go?
    Beats tha hell outta me, f*** you negroe
    But hold up Pimp! Before you go...
    BEHOLD!
    Witness The Dynasty Of This...

    HO



    And She Shall have rein ova all tha laand...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pimpin-la-zation free from da spell dat dewell inside thee
    now da True Queen arise to da pimp surprise to mesmerize his tale
    off and set to enjoy sunshine of life ....not his bag or his wife
    move forward sis and never look back !!!

    True love awaits thee
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love this flo sis!
     
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    OHHHH OHHHHH OHHHHH!!!!...

    Beautiful flow Sister...it's taking all I have not to come back @ cha with a flow of my own.... But all I'm going to say is...a true Pimp's Motto is "Cop and blow..cop and blow"

    Lilpea :1on1:
     
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    Standing on her feet and regaining her rightful crown, not going to be used any more. Flow on Poet of the Week.
     
  6. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the feedback..I was concerned at first, for I know that the title of this is somewhat controversial...I wasn't sure if it would be well-received.But, until you have lived in this place, as I have...than you may not be able to appreciate it.

    I really feel as if this capsulates a feeling within me, that I had when I was with the wrong individual. The flo is really speaking from the workings of the inner woman in me. I really have found my sound, and it is a powerful one.

    I truly feel as if God had to remove me from that situation, because I could not remove myself. And he understands that I need some time to express that. Like I said...sometimes the truth just cant be sugarcoated.

    Although the word "HO" may be an eye-sore to some....it is intended only for the visual imagery of this piece....

    Again all, thanks for tha feedback.
     
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    Sometimes we get lost in the ugliness of the world, but when we dig down soul-deep we find ourselves and the strength of who we are and cut the life-sucking parasites from us, and reclaim our lives.



    Thanks for sharing this poetic tale.:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    i guess you've had enough

    that's an understatement

    man you laid the law down here

    you let them know what it is

    and i can't be man at chu
     
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    That there...right there....was the real poetry!!!

    Yes, such a powerful piece and you layed it out in plain terms that we could all understand!!!

    This was beautiful Sis. Sweet!
     
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    sweet apple*pie:
    This forum is called "GET YOUR FLOW ON"
    and you did just that. Your strenght
    shines threw. Awesome Flo sis!


    Much Luv
     
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