Black Poetry : The Dude

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Feb 8, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Dude

    Try slaughter when he apply water to rhymes drown clowns
    Like swimming pools hemming fools up like chain links
    Fences locked in stink it intenses like prisoners in the clink
    He would take a bath and walk down a fake path of crime
    The math was ascinine didn’t add up sad and corupt doing time
    Now must go clever and grow better forget the dim groove
    He must improve himself, knowledge make a firm life and lube
    The way to earn a wife, burned twice by women with attitudes
    Stay odd like A-ROD try avoid steroids as baseball face all
    The charges he realize he could strike out, fame never grow tall
    In battles blasting clowns and fasten them down like seatbelts
    Heat felt like a hot stove his Hip Hop probe stats made steets melt
    His strong rage was solid like trees of unknown age it stood tall
    In his mind all designed to explode on a blind road no good yall
    His voice divine and like choice wine get folks drunk
    Anytime he spoke junk but was a broke punk and a chump
    He was nice with dice played craps and slayed rap crews
    His Life’s a hot target like the stock market fell to a new
    Low, obsession with speed used aggression to proceed dumber
    This phat dude had an attitude drove a divine Hummer
    One fine summer didn’t plot wise had hot merchandise
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we just don't have the plan or clue to move smoothly this was hot bruh !
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like reading this... great flow. The Dude...

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite a story, the life of "The Dude"...this sounds like there should be a part 2.
     
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