Black Poetry : The Dreamer says...

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  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Leave me alone
    I don’t want to…
    Hurt you
    I don’t want to make you cry
    Like I usually do
    I just need some time to envelope
    to enfold…enclose
    me
    in more misery
    see
    and morph into something free
    for a time
    I need to be
    Alone
    Desperately
    To establish firm ground
    On which I and I must walk on
    So I won’t be ensnared into another one
    Of yous
    With hers
    Persecution I shall know of
    No more
    Affliction for the art of loving
    Never more will be my familiarity

    (And the weaver sighs)

    I need not see you in my vision today
    For cold is the blood that runs through it
    The heart that pumps eternity
    That used to nourish you and me
    I know not your physique
    but empathize with your spirit
    and danced merrily with the twinkle…
    the stars in your eyes
    in love’s ballroom…
    in your smile
    the heart is a tough place to stay in
    especially when it used be home
    then come to terms with reality
    and see it’s just a place to be
    when you’re loved equally

    (on a dreamy note)

    It was nice to be me
    When I thought I knew
    what I was with you
    but I must cease this reverie
    and again face veracity
    you tried to tell me
    unequally yoked are you and me
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MOST INTRIGUING

    Leave me alone
    I don’t want to…
    Hurt you
    I don’t want to make you cry
    Like I usually do
    I just need some time to envelope
    to enfold…enclose
    me
    in more misery

    I am loving this... and am intrigued by the Dream Weaver-
     
  3. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I wipe the sad tears from my eyes...thank you for reading...I needed a reason to smile.
     
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    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fascinating isn't a profound enough description
    to the wonderment of interpersonal relationships everywhere...
    this piece is ssssssssmokin'!

    ................................................S...................................................

    to think that i...command such enormous power
    that i could some how hold sway over your emotions
    never in my wildest dreams....could i have conceived
    of such a notion.....

    how in the midst of all of my revelry
    inebriated...caught up in this surge of conviviality
    this ascendancy...should come with a warning label
    and yet...i am accutely aware..more so than you....

    that this "power" bestowed upon me is
    actuality a myth...'cause..see in this life of
    intense happiness..and emotional upheavel
    the one truism is...anyone worthy of your affection....
    will never....MAKE..you cry!
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AND I agree with you completely, I gotta live and learn...just sorry my heart to feel the burn...
     
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    Dream Weaver, this was soo deep...whatever the cause I wish your heart and soul a speedy recovery from the slow burn it endured:smile:
     
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    just showing some love to the dream weaver. I,m glad I stopped bye. Keep it up
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dreamweaver feelin u ...
    da pain of tears
    yet comfort on da rise look to da shy above
    their u fine love to smile again !
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Purple moon, thanks for the love, I almost forgot I wrote this, seems it came back as a reminder...
    $RICH$ darling you know I got mad love for you, thanks for droppin by and sharing a line.

    Comfort is me
    when I am free
    from wanting love desperately
    and livin without it
    has taught me
    how infinitely great
    life could be
     
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