Quiet Poetry Lounge : THE DREAM

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Asleep at three
    With my favorite blanket

    You know

    The kind with a cartoon

    Awake in my dream
    I was

    In the middle of the room

    Each corner of my cover
    Levitated

    I was frustrated

    Each corner I could see

    North, South, East and West

    In the middle was me

    Trap'd in the center
    I was in the cover waist deep

    Catching Z's in my bed
    My head said don't worry ur sleep

    But someone was there

    I screamed out loud
    But no one could hear

    Never seen a face to fear

    Because at the center
    was protection

    While screaming soundless screams
    I saw lights like beams

    Until the morning's

    Ressurection.......

    (this was three but at double 3 I remember this dream cause it's still haunting me)
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreams... Many times a message lies therein. But exactly what can be a mystery. This write makes the reader think about their own dreams poetess.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside a dream is a message an image and a meaning , some scary and some heart warming
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    the day will come that dream is no more

    the coming back to "life" every morning anew with new energy

    and see that energy will break the chain link

    it's the passage to the future

    the future of the ultimate inner self

    peace

    trust me i know some dreams from deep in my core from childhood
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not knowing which way to go can be CHAOS!!!
    and inside the mind is where is happens
    Maybe that is what came about the dream
    Keeping yourself safe is the ultimate
    We'll chase away those ol' naughty Bad Dweams!!
    :)
    Strong Post lil Sis Miss:)
     
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