Black Poetry : The Dream

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night
    This dream touched me
    I could feel you
    Within my being
    Caressing molding
    Like a fix we mix
    Within this dream
    You……
    Engaging in my heart
    Sharing that moment
    Last night

    A dream last night
    You invaded my soul
    As you entered in my dream
    Holding my being
    Folding my love
    Molding my spirit
    Deep within side me
    Loving me untouched
    Caressing my mental
    Stimulating conversation
    Dancing within the light
    Sharing a moment
    Last night

    Touching a dream

    We touched a dream
    Far above the orbs
    In between the moon
    Pass the starz
    Cross the orbits
    Last night
    A one in a lifetime love
    Last
    …………..last night

    My love moved in a direction
    That took my breathe
    Had me exhale a dream
    Last night….
    Caressing loving
    Flowing within this fantasy
    You gave me….
    Last night
    I woke up and it was you
    Holding me loving me
    Last night

    We shared a moment
    Within the wind
    with roses floating
    and angels singing

    A love ballad of our own
    Last night….
    We
    …………We touched
    …………………………we touched a dream

    (c) 2005
    A Fire & Desire
    New Vision Vol. 1
    For my baby
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and last night
    hearts came together
    on this dream of a
    tropical river
    mending taking me
    through da maze of
    starz high up like
    forever last night

    u and me
    shared a promise
    as u enter my love
    like stormy weather
    inside this dream
    as ya essence melted
    ova my mental
    last night feeling
    breakers crash my soul
    and thunder rumbling
    sending chills like
    winter cold

    last night i felt
    and taste fantasy
    of us together
    in a extreme pleasure
    from my body meassure
    u and i on da lift into
    heaven's above
    from this embracing love
    last night i kissed a dream
    that ya body here wit me

    inside the desire of
    my yearning how i
    lay in dis burning
    dream of u and me
    last night
    i kissed a dream
    crossing history
    into orbit
    making da galaxy
    spinner of love
    last night.

    feeling ya beat flow on sista
     
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    Last night
    Love played upon the moon
    And invaded our room
    Together we shared a moment
    In heavens eyes
    Last night

    You and I
    Played the starz
    And rode the heavens
    Within the light
    A dream last night
    We touched a dream
    Bodies screaming
    Name-calling
    Secret thoughts
    of love within
    A fantasy call
    Last night

    In the moment
    Essence poured
    And love melted
    As we shared a promise
    In the heavens river
    Flowing smooth
    And with ease
    You took me
    Last night

    For I called your name
    In stormy weather
    We made you molded
    My being took a hold of my mental
    Pampered my soul
    Released my spirit
    Last night
    A dream step out of my slumber
    And a fairytale of love was made
    Last night


    now you know Rich i likes when ya feeling me flow on loving this vibe....thank you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside dis dream
    last night
    as we was making love
    doves open up to spread
    beautiful wings
    covering souls
    in da midnight bling
    last night
    we kissed a dream

    spirits taking flytes
    from me and u
    skies rain down
    magical notes
    as we cross into
    a feverish stroke
    from dis dream
    of u and me
    last night

    our hearts said
    it's us forever
    kissing making
    storms is sunny
    weather from a bliss
    of dreams
    coz u vision wit me
    last night we
    touched a dream

    as my arm caressed ya body
    and my comfort start to holla
    in ya honor ya da Queen
    sweet love sitting wit me
    last night
    as starz dance in dippers
    of spools through a dream
    just u and me last night
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    slow down my car and flow nouns bazaar// like grammar teachers and hammer creatures// on microphones, my pride lame as I divide brains// into separate parts with this desperate art// like a proper doctor during surgery, don't worry about this flurry of rhymes dun, I'll stitch a ***** use needlework on a feeble jerk//
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What do this reply have to do with a Dream being touched ?
     
  7. MrFolklore

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    Was I like that last night?

    This was wrote with tender sweetness Baby Oh yes!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sounds like you and your other half ...touched something wonderful...quite wonderful. And the length of a "Touch" ...is amazing. I loved the piece you laided out. thanks
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmhmm babe that was you...lol thank you for feeling my flow happy you enjoyed Mrfolklore


    sis QT yes indeed lol thank you for the love and support i am happy you enjoyed

    Rich man you are the best poetry mate every

    love yall

    Angel
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanted 2 reply earlier, but I didn't wanna disturb tha groove.

    1st, I get hit with mzblk, then $$, (times 2).

    This was hot.
     
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