Black Poetry : The Doves Cried

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Doves cried last night
    Embrace of the deepest kind
    Upon the moon and sun rise
    It was a rush of warmth
    That came in a hush
    Last night doves cried
    As you and I
    Intertwined in the wind
    Night dream's of us
    Warmth of your love
    And heavenly embrace
    Like a summa breeze
    Bodies clash within
    The moonbeams
    As our souls gleam
    Upon the orbs
    Shades of love
    Collect around us
    In the mist
    Night dream's of us
    Peaceful as cascading falls
    Compassion mixture of two
    Upon the blue we sail
    Set in our own horizon
    And the starz followed
    Passing passion to a feverish heat
    As our hearts dance
    Doves cried…..
    As love showers us in the night
    Foreseen a bliss with one kiss
    Huggin and playin in loves fire
    Taking desires to a new level
    Doves cried…
    As you touch my body
    And enter into my soul
    We made untouchable love
    Chills went down the spine
    And the thrills release
    Love like a earthquake
    In the silvery moon
    For the starz circled
    As heaven open its doors
    Last night
    Doves cried
    of JOY... :love:
    As two became one

    (C) 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    out of every tear
    a sweet release made
    from two doves wit
    humble crave
    cross into the windz
    da path as one
    bonding love on da
    omega vision
    touching da dreams
    caressing thoughts
    comforting da moment
    of two as one
    this was awesome tyte i saw they passing by me lastnight
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In perfect harmony they laid
    In peace as love embraced them
    Bonding the vows of them
    in the midnight souls took on
    the passion of every after
    As two became one
    A touch of a dream made
    Thank you Rich…
    happy you enjoyed
    I saw them as well
    Think i know them too....:lol:
    Likes ya flow

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such images of passion laid in this warm flow.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i thought I heard the doves crying with joy..
    now I know why...
    enjoyed the flow
     
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    Beautiful piece. Love is a powerful emotion isn't it? Even better when u can express that emotion.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sister deeply your support and love is great means alot to me
    so ya heard them to huh...:lol: i feel ya thanks agian for all the loving support

    Ireadastory..indeed very powerful when spoken thanks for the love

    watz..thanks for the read and support

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really enjoyed this flow flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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