Black Poetry : The Discovery...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For my love is greater
    Then he will ever know


    Not letting my past
    Turn my future around
    Reaching above and beyond

    The love I dreamed of
    Have come to be
    As my past fades
    The clouds open
    And the comfort takes me

    Like a storm….love took its course

    Leaving my past behind
    Picking up pieces
    As his heart reaches to mine
    His spirit calls me
    As love pours sweetly
    Within my veins
    He holds the key

    Dancing like teens in love
    For the very first time
    Feeding of his essence
    Smothered in his passion
    Breathing of him

    For I have
    And I got
    A brand new love in my life
    The wind blew and picked me up
    And I landed in his arms
    As he
    Compassion ally
    Mended my trust
    And molded my heart
    Took my essence
    And covered me with his love
    Gently he strokes my mental
    As he dances in my soul
    Cascading like a waterfall
    Of a perfect dream
    My baby
    My sweet baby
    Loves me over and over again

    The starz shine brighter then the sun
    And the moon gleams like never before
    The past fading and I see the future road
    And love is anew have arrived

    When they say one man can make
    A woman hate all men…
    They left out one man can make a woman see
    That all men are not the same


    (c) 2004
    Poetry by an Angel
    For my baby :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! now u know i be loving dis here
    so true one good man can open the door to a heart
    this was very very nice
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your loving support I am so happy you enjoyed this scribe. Angel
     
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    yes indeed thank u sis for a piece of ya art.
     
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    WHOA!!! You took me places with those last few lines

    When they say one man can make
    A woman hate all men…
    They left out one man can make a woman see
    That all men are not the same​

    You made me proud to be a man, and if is possible for me to love women any more than I to, you've done that as well. Thank you for this gift of love's lesson!!! :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Blk Angel....

    This is beautiful.

    I'm proud of you. :D

    :thanks: for sharing another part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    My sister...you said a mouthfull :bowdown:
     
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    You go on with your bad self!
    done drop some pain, some love, some growth, and some knowledge wrapped all up into one!

    Loved the drop sis!
     
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    :grouphug: thanks 4 spreading some of your sunshine 4 us...nice flow sis :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love and support on this piece/peace
    much love to all
    Angel
     
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