Black Poetry : the devil's deconstruction

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  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :devil: :devil: :devil: :devil: :devil: :devil: :hot:
    Through billowy black clouds
    he emerged-
    a silver shimmer in the side of my veiw...
    my eyes askance, blinded by his simple beauty-
    his crude features and tender eyes,
    sanguine smile, and powerful physique---
    o be still my racing heart...
    voice reverberating telepathically
    calling me...amazing me...
    now how did he know my name?
    And angels gathered to swathe him in thier wings;
    gossamer silk fingers soothing his skin
    as they beckoned me closer...
    "Come, kiss, and let go"
    Suspicious eyes...now slanted...
    narrowed and leveled on his lips---
    parted and inviting...enticing lips,
    while the angles writhed and sung
    sweet revivals of childhood memories...
    hopes, dreams, and wishes for love
    that I had whispered in prayers
    and handed to stars...
    and closer I did step-
    his heat lured me maliciously
    meticulously tickiling my skin
    magnetically gravitating me into his orbit
    til mere inches spaned between us---
    then I was seized into his embrace
    and smothered by his kiss...
    damnable thief done stole my breath!-
    and then....
    then the ground shuddered
    and the sky began to cry bitter acid tears
    that consumed my flesh with each deadly kiss-
    and the angels' wings burst into flames
    and they fluttered into flight laughing like banshies...
    oh devious demons...so unholy in thine quest!
    He stood there balefully
    eyes swimming in blood tears
    while I cried and struggled to be free
    cursing him in his mission to betray...
    but steadfast he held me, calming my spasm,
    and in the quietest voice he shouted...
    "Just love me still...stay..."
    Conflicted, I touched his melting face
    and we merged---
    past and future collided and forged,
    melding and shaping our destiny...
    I knew upon sight he would be the death of me...
    but oh...what a way to die...
    in this devil's arms
    doing the death dance
    while we erode and dissipate
    converging together
    to melt and the evaporate back into antimatter
    and float amongst our sins the nitrous air---
    forgiven
    sanctified
    forever....
    loved.
    ©copyright ambroziya snow2001
    all rights reserved



    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :devil:

    :angel1:
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SGS ~ wow sista

    See what we've been missin'..... the sista's got SKILLZ...!!

    :hot: :hot: this piece is!


    And if you stay away too long next time I'm gon' have to
    :uzi: you :eeek: myself...

    Your wordz were sorely missed sista!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    StarG,

    This is flame flame flame!!!!

    Dug it immensely!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your poetry like a woman’s embrace invited me in
    But then began to suck my wind as I read your script of the devils embrace

    This piece was so entrancing I just couldn’t look away
    Beautifully engaging and skillfully painted

    Poetry no doubt:

    Thank you
     
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    StarGoddess!!! :wave:

    Welcome Home Sis!!!

    Whew!!! and when you come back you
    you come in full force!

    luv'n this peace

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well well now!!!

    thank yall all for the kind and feverish welcome back!!! :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

    i missed yall oh sooooooo much!!! lol


    thanks for the read!!!


    da :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: GODDESS SUPREME
     
  7. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU

    i am humbled

    da :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: GODDESS SUPREME
     
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    StarGoddess,

    :hot: :hot: and one mo' time :hot:

    this piece was....

    one love,blak
     
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    StarGoddess

    Your scribe is....flamin hot! Got my keyboard on fiyah!!!
     
  10. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELL.....

    thank ya
    thank ya
    thank ya!!!


    i am humbled kind poets!


    da :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: GODDESS SUPREME
     
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