Black Poetry : the devil's deconstruction

[StarGoddess]

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Through billowy black clouds
he emerged-
a silver shimmer in the side of my veiw...
my eyes askance, blinded by his simple beauty-
his crude features and tender eyes,
sanguine smile, and powerful physique---
o be still my racing heart...
voice reverberating telepathically
calling me...amazing me...
now how did he know my name?
And angels gathered to swathe him in thier wings;
gossamer silk fingers soothing his skin
as they beckoned me closer...
"Come, kiss, and let go"
Suspicious eyes...now slanted...
narrowed and leveled on his lips---
parted and inviting...enticing lips,
while the angles writhed and sung
sweet revivals of childhood memories...
hopes, dreams, and wishes for love
that I had whispered in prayers
and handed to stars...
and closer I did step-
his heat lured me maliciously
meticulously tickiling my skin
magnetically gravitating me into his orbit
til mere inches spaned between us---
then I was seized into his embrace
and smothered by his kiss...
damnable thief done stole my breath!-
and then....
then the ground shuddered
and the sky began to cry bitter acid tears
that consumed my flesh with each deadly kiss-
and the angels' wings burst into flames
and they fluttered into flight laughing like banshies...
oh devious demons...so unholy in thine quest!
He stood there balefully
eyes swimming in blood tears
while I cried and struggled to be free
cursing him in his mission to betray...
but steadfast he held me, calming my spasm,
and in the quietest voice he shouted...
"Just love me still...stay..."
Conflicted, I touched his melting face
and we merged---
past and future collided and forged,
melding and shaping our destiny...
I knew upon sight he would be the death of me...
but oh...what a way to die...
in this devil's arms
doing the death dance
while we erode and dissipate
converging together
to melt and the evaporate back into antimatter
and float amongst our sins the nitrous air---
forgiven
sanctified
forever....
loved.
©copyright ambroziya snow2001
all rights reserved



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[N2urSoul]

SGS ~ wow sista

See what we've been missin'..... the sista's got SKILLZ...!!

this piece is!


And if you stay away too long next time I'm gon' have to
you myself...

Your wordz were sorely missed sista!

 

[GQ]

StarG,

This is flame flame flame!!!!

Dug it immensely!!!


GQ

 

[shaz]

Your poetry like a woman’s embrace invited me in
But then began to suck my wind as I read your script of the devils embrace

This piece was so entrancing I just couldn’t look away
Beautifully engaging and skillfully painted

Poetry no doubt:

Thank you

 

[Destee]

StarGoddess!!!

Welcome Home Sis!!!

Whew!!! and when you come back you
you come in full force!

luv'n this peace



Destee