Black Poetry : THE DEVIL GOT ME PAGED

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  1. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE DEVIL GOT ME PAGED

    Conversations Deep Inside
    Running Wild Across My Mind
    There Is No Severe Case
    Just Need To Release
    From This Rat Race.

    Tired And Weary
    When I Get Down To Pray,
    Half The Time
    Don't Know What To Say.

    Tossed And Driven
    Through These Life's Dilemma's
    Thinking To Myself
    Am I Forgiven.

    What Did I Do
    To Deserve This Stage?
    Cause It Seems Like
    The Devil Got Me Paged.

    I'm Sick And Tired
    Of This Mess
    Wishing That Jesus
    Take This Off My Chest.

    "THE DEVIL GOT ME PAGED"

    By. Maurice E. Roundtree
    Copyright (c) Metree Enterprises 1999
    :eek:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    this was very nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love & bond
    welcome within u kin my friend this was tyte.
    i felt it deep and say cast all cares unto him
    he is the protector ......very nice scribe welcome !:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo thanks alot mzblkangel and $$Rich$$ for the luv and comments on the poem and to welcome me to this site...I will do my best to be fluent and to inspire others with my craft of writing...I know it will take others to another level....Mr. Metree
     
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    Welcome to Destee.. Metree

    Release the flow. Get it off your chest.
     
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    I'm Sick And Tired
    Of This Mess
    Wishing That Jesus
    Take This Off My Chest.

    very intricate i like this!
    :toast:
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep...this was a strong flow...much respect to you for this
     
  8. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks alot for the luv...Hodee, More, and True Love
     
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