Black Poetry : The Depths Of My Deep

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The bermuda triangle got lost
    cause curiosity got the best of it
    trying to find the beginning to my
    ending but I don't end so it got
    lost looking for something in me
    that doesn't exist / I don't "begin"
    anywhere but am "reborn" / when I think
    of you, the depths of my deep allow
    me to circumvent the temptations of
    the serpent and know that God is
    Omnipresent cause he was the space that
    shrunk itself when I became close to you
    The depths of my deep allows me to inhale
    coal dust and cry VSI* diamonds for you
    to bathe in /

    I imagined your relection bounding off the
    facets and strobe streaking the sky 'til
    it rained technicolor ink drops tattooing
    my black and white monochromatic subsistence
    The depths of my deep allow me to see ME
    in this primary, secondary, and tertiary
    projection after you touch me

    The depths of my deep / bottomless / swallowing
    up blak holes and misplacing my heart purposely,
    to let you reside there and beat a pulse on my
    pneuma** so beat me / so I can feel you / on my chest /
    in my hands / on my tongue / on my back / leaving my tear
    ducts / raising my temp (let me see your finger, do
    I have a fever?) / through my skin when I sweat.../
    and providing me shelter when your Ka*** is gone.

    (thump tap thump tap tap) thank you.

    (c)2001 blakverb


    *VSI (very small inclusions) diamond grade

    **pneuma (noo ma) ths soul or spirit

    ***Ka (Kah) one of the kemetic soul dimensions of a person. The Ka is viewed as being a persons physicality. Actually, the Ka has different levels (inferior, intermediate,and divine, with "inferior" as the physicality level)
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU...

    Are in "the zone"...

    "knock knock".....it's me N2...let me in Blak....
    I've got something for you... and "it" can't wait...!!
    SHOULDA, COULDA, -- ah hell...Would you???!! :kiss:
    :lol: :lol:

    Tight & Deep! Much :heart: Very thorough -Blak!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I AGREE IN A TYGHT ZONE ...FLOW ON!
     
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    my my my my my my my

    i tend to lose myself
    in the deeps of your depth
    because the knowledge from whence you speak
    floats me to a place
    i've never been
    where i only go on special occasions
    alone
    for the bermuda triangle
    was not too long ago
    trying to lose me at sea
    but left me alone
    with waves
    and got lost in you
    finding me
    floating.
    -7
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repost
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These words lay infinitely deep on the readers psyche. Yet another tight drop.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Watz. It's appreciated indeed.

    blak
     
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    again awesome brutha just awesome
     
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