Black Poetry : The Defeat Police

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Sep 18, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like to seek knowledge
    Less drama that way
    Failure in the end
    Lets chaos rule the day

    Hear that? ((ding))
    Take a seat my friend
    School is in,
    May I teach again?

    It's time we learn
    How to police defeat
    Smelling like a rose
    Standing on your feats

    While moving ahead
    With your dome held high
    Never look back
    That's suicide

    Take it from me ~
    I've been on the beat
    Flat on my @ss
    In defeat

    But you can't stop me
    Once I'm on a roll
    I'm a blue blood poet
    With a soulful scroll

    That's another story
    For another time
    A bad attitude
    Can defeat the mind

    Vengence is mine
    With another try;

    Keep...
    Your head,
    To the sky

    Say it again!

    Keep...
    Your head,
    To the sky


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes indeed
    you are a strong poet
    i am feeling you on tihs
    lesson learned
    feeling the strenght
    in your flow
    for real
    "keep your head to the sky"
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was on hit
    i felt ya vibe in direct
    keep ya head up high to da sky
    dis was str8 correct keep it
    coming like dat
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love to you for this one, 1poet. I agree with every line, and the flow is tight.
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes teacher I'm ready to learn lol :)
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Night Patrol

    We are all in this together
    Through ups and downs
    Good,
    Striving to be better
    Success is ours!

    Thanks!

    :toast:
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    that's right
    thro a lil earth wind and fire on em...
    word...keep up da patrol brah...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reasons

    Thank you, bruh.
     
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    Flow on poet
     
  10. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE

    Thank you! :)
     
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