Black Poetry : The Decision

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Jan 22, 2010.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I been wanting to get lost n u lately n allow my body to dissolve into ya deep caress b/c ur my mental and physical intoxication frees my mind. It's been 6 long years and I've ran thru allot. You've been my bestfriend, my ride or die and now I'm in search of my wife!"
     
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    she closer then you think look for da signs
     
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    caramelpython:
    What a beautiful sentiment.
    I hope "The Decision" brings
    her to you. I luv the way your
    pen flows......


    Much Luv & Peace,


    ~4EVER
    :heart:
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Real Truth!




    And this is the bottom line.

     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello caramelpython

    I love this because it epitomizes the natural evolving relationship between
    a man and a woman, from friends to soul mates/husband and wife.

    Your words express you are deeply rooted in her soul and she in yours.

    If this is a proposal poem... she's going to treasure it. Beautiful write!

    Feelin’itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Are these vows brotha ? lol It kinda reads like one :)
    Good to read again :)
     
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