Black Poetry : THE DAYS MUSICAL MOMENTS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Soft notes crashin my soul
    gentle tunes my heart now knows
    there's a rapture in every beat
    tenderly cascading dancin feet
    a melody tingles as bodies mengles
    playing each beginning in embrace
    warm harmony fill da air
    we dreameth of pleasant care
    inspiration of triumphant fare
    violin funk of regal royality drift
    as ballottin horns loyality bliss
    pacifying indingo hearts aglow
    as the musical vel aflo
    deep into my afro-soul
    da moment of da day lingers
    as an golden pond in tyme
    off the gheto jazz & blues
    experiencing wrath / happiness
    to fill da void of loneliness
    my spirit excluded from the gang
    feeling a yen of yang to my brain
    my love harvest in the moment

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It seems like you let your mind get lost in so many flavas of music, as you allowed the notes to whisk you away. It's wonderful how music can do that to us, and you really captured that feeling.
     
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    thankz watz indeed it's what takes me into the next day in peace of mind
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was sweet and a little sad. I hope you're not feeling lonely. Here's a hug to you! :grouphug:
     
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    very nice peace, I loved the riddim
     
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    that very hug as taken me into the next turn from loneliness into happiness
    thank you wisdom7 sometime the mind drift off and fine itself alone .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt a peace calm in this verse made me relax as the mind wonders across the orbs in search of only the wind....i feel this run through as a new day unfolds...i likes!!!!!!


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    thankz Angel surely on every passing note a mild breeze touch
    and i feel relief and comfort in my day each day thankz............
     
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