Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Day's Events, Part III

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two hands holding
    One energy force moving
    Walking amoung the late afternoon crowd
    Stopping here and there for quick kisses
    Quicker glances
    We really are all alone
    A universe of our own
    Thousands of eyes wonder
    Yet no one sees us
    But us

    We don't care
    We can't care
    This is our time
    Oh how you move the fork in you mouth
    Thoughts of eating our favorite meal
    Fill our minds
    As we quickly swallow prepared food

    Walking and flowing
    Flowing and walking
    Perhaps it's during this time
    I love you most
    Digging you
    Outside our love bubble
    All of your magic working
    Watching life try to catch up to you
    So proud to know you
    Squeezing your hand just a little tighter
    I love you

    We smile
    Watching children play
    A setting sun
    Moves you closer to me
    Snug under my arm
    Sitting on our bench made of gold
    Worthy of this love
    This day

    BE
     
  2. alyce

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    so luscious,
    the feeling of
    being
    alone in
    the crowd

    with you

    our bubble
    now transparent
    we openly
    share with
    the world
    who we are
    &
    how we move
    when we
    walk ~ no we
    float above
    the ground

    we sit
    beside each
    other
    always touching
    my eyes
    search your
    face
    for more
    of you
    and I lose
    my breath
    when your
    lips move
    remembering
    the feel
    of secrets
    whispered
    in private
    places
    my body shivers
    beneath our
    table

    you smile
    and move your
    hand beneath
    my skirt

    I'm mesmerized
    by your
    rhythms
    while you slowly
    chew your food
    remembering
    the motions
    of your lips
    when making my
    lips
    move

    I don't want you
    to stop
    but we MUST go
    ...& I use my
    eyes to tell
    you so...


    :heart:
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ooohhhhh Lawwwd !!!

    where yall going ??!!!

    i gotta go see where yall went ...

    hehehe

    part III here i come

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    can there be a finale more grand?

    I swear I don't think so...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was extremely awesome what a final call
    woooooooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! u two ...
     
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    deep sigh...I sit here taking in all these sumptuous words, just awestruck by the passion displayed. Consider me wowed.
     
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    crazy, just.crazy!
     
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