Black Poetry : The Day's Events, Part II

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The inside of your right thigh
    Rests across me
    Your head on my heart
    Moving with my chest
    I inhale our love
    Exhale nothing
    Stay within me
    As I stay in you

    There is no need for us to speak
    So much is said in the silence of our joy
    So much is felt in the rhythm of our stillness
    The slightest movement a potential distraction
    But like the rains of April
    Movement comes
    We begin another storm

    For you
    I am love's obedient soldier
    Snaping to attention
    Blindly following your every command
    The highest standards set
    Every fantasy met
    All I have
    Is all for you
    And them some more
    More
    So much more
    Always more

    Is there enough love to make?
    No
    Not for us
    Not like this
    Not when I have you in my arms
    The rest of the day will wait for us

    BE
     
  2. alyce

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    love makes us love
    makes so much
    more love to make
    and we may even cling
    to the rippling
    rhythms we created
    in the corridor of time
    long
    after forever

    the calms before
    our storms
    re-ignite the
    fires
    and our storms
    after the calms
    takes us to
    levels so much
    higher

    there is so much
    more love when
    I am filled
    with you
    when you are
    deep in me
    my body quakes
    with all your
    force
    and all you
    are
    I ever keep
    in me

    there is so much
    more love
    when love lives
    long and opens
    places
    to
    store
    more
    love

    :heart:

    a
     
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    ok ok ok ... whew !

    part II opened with ...

    "the inside of your right thigh"

    whew!

    i gotta go see part III ...
    just gotta

    one question though ...
    am i having cyber sex by reading these peace's ???

    hehehe

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    getting down to it!

    this is delicious stuff...watchin ya work it out! yeah
     
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    right wings bring hot things y'all on fire on to 3
    what will i see next what an event
     
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    Whew...a show of love, so tastefully and blissfully shown. I am certainly enjoying this. Now on to part three.
     
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    haha! so much fun I'm having on the reminisce tip!
     
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