Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Day's Events, Part 1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 19, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 30, 2001
    Messages:
    1,440
    Likes Received:
    86
    Ratings:
    +86
    This morning I wore a suit, shirt, and tie
    Flawlessly coordinated
    Conservatively fashionable
    Fresh cut
    Shined shoes
    Strong, handsome black man
    Blessed and prosperous
    Representing

    Moving through the mid-morning crowd
    We found each other
    Two heat-seeking missiles
    Contact
    "Hello my love"
    Our day has begun

    Off to quiet places
    Our own, the only faces
    So beautiful
    Can't take my eyes off you
    Can't take my mind off all I know of you
    Respect in you
    Love all you do
    Have me
    I'm here for you

    Soon the suit became too many clothes
    With sensual and expert recklessness
    You removed everything from me
    Stripping me of life itself
    Suspended in the air of each other's heat
    There is no life
    Only our love
    Soul deep
    Free and shameless
    Excessive
    So **** good
    Harmony

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2001
    Messages:
    2,922
    Likes Received:
    83
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Counselor
    Location:
    mid-atlantic
    Ratings:
    +85
    hold me tightly
    I can't believe my heart
    so afraid you will disappear
    if I open my eyes
    I cannot trust my mind
    as I feel your strength
    press against my body
    I want you want you want you
    there is a place
    reserved for our love
    quickly quickly
    take me
    can we become one
    right here my love?
    the heat
    the scent of love
    familiar and long awaited
    fills our nostrils
    and we hold our breath
    to sustain that 'high'...

    hold my hand
    beautiful one
    love me far
    beyond the sky...

    :heart:

    a
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 22, 2001
    Messages:
    34,773
    Likes Received:
    8,979
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    betwixt and between
    Ratings:
    +9,677
    oh my my my ...

    whew !

    going to part II now ...
    over here single and alone

    i'm scared to look!
    (but i just gotta)

    hehehe

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2001
    Messages:
    52
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    I'm diggin

    these events, y'all!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    took me to the place of events continue i'm listening y'all
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Great collab to bring back Rich. This was so devinely flowed, gee, can't wait to read some more.
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2001
    Messages:
    2,922
    Likes Received:
    83
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Counselor
    Location:
    mid-atlantic
    Ratings:
    +85
    had to bump this :)
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Day's Events Part
  1. Heartbeat
    Replies:
    6
    Views:
    1,315
  2. Heartbeat
    Replies:
    6
    Views:
    1,287
  3. Heartbeat
    Replies:
    6
    Views:
    1,137
  4. chuck
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    61
  5. crwn
    Replies:
    73
    Views:
    1,800