Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Day Time Stood Still

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It was the day of yesteryears
    when time stood still in fears
    as my eyes peer in tears
    that our days must end
    not even could we be friends
    with all that we done through sin

    I wanted it to be over
    but time moved even slower
    clone to the facts of morrow
    left my heart in deep sorrow
    wishing someone new come through
    what am i gonna do

    I love every moment shared
    slowly drifting away beyond time
    as our day long beef arise
    again and again , will this day end
    got me twisted in this trend
    between rapture lust and sensual love

    I guess i'm alone now
    and still no tomorrow
    the day lingers on!
    :qqb019:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What this one made me think of, was that last argument you had with someone, the words said, and how harshness and pain of those words just echo. Tomorrow comes, but not soon enough.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah! sometime the day seem longer then it should when stuff weight in on the mindset
    just sleep it off and awaken to a new day on a new star search ...thankz watz
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This Is That Time to realize Who and Where You are. Loved ones Should be LOVED and Apreciated. Never Taking Forgranted. Seeing LIFE for what It really is, The Beauty each Person Possesses. GREAT Scribe Brother Poet. Flow On:10200:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so right PLATINUM i agree thankz a million lil sis
     
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    HI Brother RICH
    When sadness comes to the heart.
    It do feel like all things around you
    Moves in slow motion.
    So slow that it feel like time is standing still.
    Because we don't want to let go of the
    happy moments, and the good time shared
    I am feeling all of this and more.

    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true sister Blue but when you just have too .....it is what it is....
    like a missing person
     
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    I felt this and was reminded of how long the night seems when you are desperate for the light of day! Sleepless nights seem to never end! But I'm glad they dont last forever!
     
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    sho ya right and even when it seem long it do come to an end .....i see the light !
     
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