Black Poetry : The day the SUN committed suicide

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one is to blame yet
    everyone is pointing the finger

    the sun did not rise today
    the sun decided to die today
    it left a note that read:

    "you all know why I now reside
    waiting for my reincarnation...

    The corners are crowded with people
    waiting for time to pass yet not
    a new day to come

    resisting the night / the reason for
    my "past" existence because the
    dreams brought too much pain
    or no dreams materialized to
    technicolor

    Stomachs are restless hungry in a country
    that waste to much

    bullets are the wind chimes for the
    mentally diabled...those whose
    \minds are crippled with fear
    hope
    less
    ness

    death is your favorite pastime
    synonymous to a type
    of darkness that doesn't bring me
    but more darkness
    and no one seems to really
    care

    common sense tells me that there are
    more good than bad people exponentially
    yet too many stand on hushed feet
    when lifes are pushed over the
    edge of......
    ...that same darkness that doesn't
    bring me

    I got tired of crying and putting out my
    own existence so to ease the pain
    "I QUIT"

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done Poet. Feeling this.

    BE
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BRAVO!!!

    I'm bowing now.

    a
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    :shades:
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've...

    [SIZE=huge]...done it, yet,
    again Mr. Verb. Simply,
    amazing, pa; not
    surprisingly. I can
    always feel, and
    get into your
    work, immensely...
    [/SIZE]
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    verb

    deep deep dun
    2001
    death of a sun
    we on the run
    under the gun
    this ain't fun
    soon there were none

    this belongs in the all-time Blakverb
    files this was the illest **** dun
    i'm feeling ya 40,000 percent

    DSSNY
     
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