Black Poetry : The Day of...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s the day before
    I marry you boy
    I’m nervous as hell
    And I’m tryin’ not to tell
    I’m scared baby
    What if this maybe
    Doesn’t work out
    I have some doubts
    Even though I know
    That I love you so
    More than anyone
    I know that you’re the one
    You’re my very best-friend
    Until my life ends
    But I’m still kinda scared
    And I’m wonderin’ if you care…

    Now it’s the day of the wedding
    And I’m scared of the feeling
    Haven’t seen you all day
    And my mind runs in pace
    I miss so d*mn much
    I miss feeling your touch
    I just need you right now
    To ease this feeling out
    Baby I’m wondering
    How you’re feeling
    If you’re a little nervous
    And if your observant
    Of the way that I feel
    Cuz its scary and real
    But I know I love you
    And that our love is true…


    So why the feeling of nervousness?
    And why the uncertainty of my confess?


    Now we’re at the altar
    And we seal our love in a kiss
    And all my feelings of falter
    Are caught somewhere between the bliss
    I don’t know why I was scared
    To even begin with
    I don’t know if you cared
    To even begin with
    Its been 6 weeks now
    And I’m happily in love
    And I could never see myself without
    Him and my God above…
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was soooooooooooo beautiful!

    I loved this poem so much I think you are so talented and gifted, it's one thing to have talent it's another thing to know what to do with it, so don't hold back....Do your thing we are loving the vibe that you bring!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    You should put this here on a plate. In rememberance of your special day. This is beautiful!
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aawww, how beautiful and sweet and lovin and girl i could go on and on lol. but i really did like this...
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwwwww thanks everybody:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was so sweet and awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
    i truely loved it
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D:D:D thanks rich