Black Poetry : The Day of the Un-touching

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  1. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    The Day of the Un-touching
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    Jahvandus Kwu



    primal lost it's reflection
    assembling on midst gatherings
    kneeling faces and deep breathes
    my counterpart's bungalow seeps
    clockwise coition to teardrop majesty
    aromas that mock her deflowering palm wine licks...me
    bamboo ethics downpour on Neptune
    leaving 3 fingers natural on instinct's brow
    we dredged in blu tenements
    linen ashes became our compound stare
    copper clothe protection lace sealed her warmth
    to press mental crystal portraits of sighs
    we found eclair skies from adjacent epiphany
    I never traced you
    you never I...
    coporal harmony in solitary finds


    (c) 2001 oBsidiAn Publishings
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE word play...

    let the river flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again

    u show me the side of greatness
    ya word play is masterful......thankz:toast:
     
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    Jah..

    This was masterfully scribed!! I loved the unveiling of this!!

    *tactile-less-ness*

    :heart:
     
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    Jah.....

    Very imaginative imagery....
    thanks for sharing..


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    welcome back bro' how's da family? i see the pen is still strong...

    please sit for a while and pour into us all your scribes...
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ohhh

    "aromas that mock her deflowering palm wine licks...me
    bamboo ethics downpour on Neptune
    leaving 3 fingers natural on instinct's brow
    we dredged in blu tenements"


    I love this verse...when I closed my eyes after soaking in this I got a vivid picture of Mars and Venus in deep conversations....

    Welcome home



    One
     
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    in memory of ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    R.I.P...............Poet !
     
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    May his family find peace in his writings, for they truly were beautiful...
     
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