Black Poetry : The day n you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by insol33, Feb 15, 2005.

  1. insol33

    insol33 Member MEMBER

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    Mighta posted this one before, when i first wrote it, but was reading it again and thought I would put it up.....


    Love is crazy
    I never knew I could be so soaked in happiness
    I can’t wait for the next time
    The craving swirls into confusion
    About how it could happen so fast
    And still be so good

    The numbing sensation just makes me raw
    So d*mn open
    Like seconds of pleasure
    So deep for hours and hours
    Our thoughts
    Completing each other’s

    I have to push the thought of your voice
    Out of my head, just to get through the day
    The longing to complete you
    Overwhelms
    Your voice in my head, like a secret
    Forbidden

    I long to wear you like a softly-scented cologne,
    To smell your essence
    Thick like the fog on a warm winter’s day
    To inhale you with each breath from the moment I wake
    To taste you on the wind,
    Gentle on my tongue like the thoughts of flavor

    Till the next time
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love's great twist can be as bright and beautiful
    this one note of sweet love & divine pleasure i
    feel every thing here i know love so well ..........
    speak on !!!
     
  3. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece
    Love can be grand
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was thick with urgency, loved it. Flow on brotha.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This

    Is POETRY

    ...Like finding water in a desert place within myself,
    I drank incessantly of these awesome stanzas...

    Encore...​
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice enjoyed the style...Angel
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Geeeez...this was very very nice. That's all I can say for now, Sol.

    :heart: moham
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes it was beautifull Poet....




    thanks for putting this up...








    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so amazing in so many ways. Love the way you portrayed love, baby.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this so much..........