Black Poetry : The Dating Game

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Datin' Game

    Hello.
    How are U doing today?
    Nice weather we're having.
    Do U have a man?
    Forget beatin' around the bush, let's get right 2 the point.
    Have U ever been certified?
    What about bein' institutionalized?
    Do U have any ex's that U refuse 2 let go?
    Said no when he told U he wanted U 2 leave him alone?
    Now almost everyday U leave extended messages on his phone?
    See, in the dating game, that's the type of stuff we need 2 know.
    So what if she's fine, her mindset is blown,
    Her actions & reactions are reminiscent of something from the twilight zone.
    But you're unaware of this cuz you're more concerned with
    gettin inside her puss than her head.
    Her pretty face & narrow waist had U eager 2 be misled.
    Now U gotta lay in the bed U made
    with a bedspread of nails & razor blades.
    Cuz you're due 2 have a newborn babe in less than 270 days
    with a woman U just found out was on the border of being insane.
    Stuff like that makes U wanna stop playin' the Dating Game...
    doesn't it?

    Hey, babygirl, so U wanna be involved with me?
    Before we commit I have 2 admit that i'm a stone cold mysogynist.
    If U look in the dictionary, U'll see my grinning mug under chauvinist.
    My reason 2 womanize is justified by the 8-1 ratio of chicks 2 guys
    Due 2 the 5 being sexually denied cuz their dudes are locked inside
    the belly of the beast.
    Then there's the 2 whose potential mates have embraced homosexuality.
    But when you're with me, I'll make U feel like you're my one & only.
    Oh yeah, and my insecurities make me a little too controlling.
    But it's alright, cuz if I wasn't aggressively domineering with U, someone else would be.
    Like, I'll sit in your ride while U pump your gas,
    And don't even try 2 get me 2 carry your bags,
    Cuz ain't nothin' wrong with your hands.
    I've got 3 baby's mamas but I only acknowledge one,
    Cuz she's my most recent.
    But if U get with me, there won't be no problem for me 2 leave it.
    So what's the deal?
    Can we still chill?
    U say U want a man that's real, and I'm as real as it gets.
    I hope your closet's got enough room 4 me 2 put my baggage in.


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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now one way to attack the point of dating
    the game we never know the answers too but
    this change the outlook ......flow head on say it again
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some things we don't learn until it's too late. Guess that's why it's important to at least try to get to know what the deal is within. Point poetically taken. Flow on.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this flow had alot of good meaningful points...well written:)
     
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    My brother...u dropped some food for thought on this forum...

    Sooooooooooo happy to have you back writing again!

    This was definitely a "thought" provoking piece...full of truth and light!

    Some of those lines...especially in that last part, struck like lightning!

    Amazing and Positive...as always!

    You gonna have to keep those haitus to a minimum...k,

    Much love to you!
    Sage
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum...point well taken bro. you summed the game up in a nutshell. and most times thats all it is a game, its just all in how you play it.
     
  7. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sis. watz, it's a game we gotta play, but we gotta keep our eyes open 4 the trick plays. Peace.

    Lovely, thank U 4 the read.

    Sis. sage, glad U liked. Will do. Many blessings.

    phenomenal, it's a game that U don't lose in, U learn. Peace.
     
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    Kamau~ Active Member MEMBER

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    you really rocked this point of view chief...you get a soulclap for that!!!
     
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    Lovin this flow, creative as well as realistic. You are so on point with this one. You keep flowin the way you flow.
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    wow dude...
    you sure know how to come back with a bang...
    u called a lot of catz out with this one...word
    one love
    khasm
     
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