Black Poetry : The Dating Game (Epic Version)

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    It's very sad in this day and age for men on the dating scene to lead women on in these various ways and for women to allow these men to do these things to them. Where has our women's self-esteem gone to? Are we this desperate for a man to settle for his self interests and get in where we fit in? Enjoy :) I realize that I'm opening a can of worms with this piece, yet poetry is about truth not fiction....

    let's play the game of dating
    five women to one male
    each of their own secret category
    promising not to tell

    oh well guess i'll have to be the one
    going into significant detail

    while the other chicks are waiting
    standing and contemplating what
    exactly evolved from this conversation

    the first one in the making
    awaits his romantic interest
    none of the other girls compare
    to her yet and still he has self-interests

    the second female comes with
    benefits of friendship she can run a
    show from toe to toe on the late
    night creep tip but his girl would
    never know of another honeydip
    even she knows to nip it in the bud
    to save a fat lip

    the third girl doesn't come with
    any benefits of friendship yet she
    can run and operate trains on
    the late night creep tip while
    his passengers scream and yell "All Aboard"
    during the evening of a late hour shift

    the fourth woman becomes acquinted
    and admires him from afar
    she'd be willing to do anything
    just to be with him but he has no
    special romantic interests in her

    the fifth woman is much older
    admiring him from afar she'd be willing
    to do anything just to be with him too
    even buy him a luxurious fancy car
    although quite tempting he has no romantic
    special interests in her

    so let's play the dating game
    keeping this a secret between me and her man






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    it's not how the game played
    but when it's played wit whom
    i've seen it , been their , it's wild
    and how they open self up to be played with

    u open a book worm here of reality in today's world
    what's going on !!
    and the secret still remain
     
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    THE LEARNING CHANNEL

    Yeah, like my 4 y/o son would say: Daddy, what that could do for me?

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    thanx Richy Rich

    it seems like the responses are split between men and women
    you don't seem to be amazed yet Kitana and Cindy were quite amazed based on their responses to the non-Epic version

    peace

    pd
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    poetsought

    you a trip!

    alright now don't get any ideas :lol:

    peace

    poeticd
     
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