Black Poetry : the dark parts of a love to strong........baller i need help with this one

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  1. ballerSon

    ballerSon Member MEMBER

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    I loved you with all my hearts fire
    How could betray me and the love we have aquired
    Memories we've gain and the special games that we played
    When I look at you I could see you slowly growning old, with a smile on your face and my hands around your waist
    You see when I saw you I could already see my future, its you and me until the end forever my bestfriend
    Now that you have turned your back on our love that future is no longer there
    So when I look at you now all I see is lies and fire surrounding me for an eternity
    The devil can have his way with me I dont even care because with out you there is no future for me here
    So devil you want me ill help you to have me ill end my life right here
    A bottle of tylenol should do the trick just a few shakes and kicks
    Then its lights out im foaming at the mouth then she screams out im pregnant
    You almost did kill me but at the end your lie was my savior
     
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    great write the concept of it shows da darkside of love indeed
     
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    Those were dark days…I remember them well
    Depression. Sadness. With a smidgeon of hell
    I’ve visited that place
    This dark place
    Where rational minds refuse to go
    Where self-esteems
    Are pulled
    Real
    L
    O
    W

    I’ve visited that place
    That dark place
    Where visions of the future slowly fade
    And once-happy spirits
    Are happily laid
    L
    O
    W

    The will to live
    The desire to succeed
    Are driven to levels where broken hearts bleed
    Where boiling points are run to their max
    And in every direction you look
    B.L.A.C.K

    Yeah…that place

    ‘til you bury the pain…and get over the lies
    Push away from her touch and block out her cries
    The hurt will linger and haunt your soul
    Making you destroy all the happiness you’ve known
    Inviting you to repeat this one destructive act
    ‘til all you can see is
    B.L.A.C.K

    (NO ONE SHOULD HAVE TO GO DOWN THAT ROAD)
     
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