Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Dark Lady

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mrron, Dec 17, 2006.

  1. mrron

    mrron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It happened when joy dissipated
    Into a bastion of despair
    Morale became the twin of failure
    Suddenly in just a flash of time
    A ray of light penetrated the total darkness of night
    And there appeared "The Dark Lady"
    The brief illumination highlighted her shimmering beauty
    Replete with Egyptian eyes and long flowing hair
    Her shadow cast upon the smooth ground
    Revealing her truly amazing form

    A lady capable of imparting a fortune of wisdom
    Remarked about the turmoil of love gained and lost
    And passion misplaced
    The endless drifting from one pile of dust
    To another pile of dust
    In search of eternal and consuming love

    With her feminine wilds demonstrated
    How one woman could have it all
    And offer it to a man
    Who deserved to have it all

    She was in the spotlight for just an instant
    But time was suspended
    And it seemed like an eternity

    Then came the kiss, passionate and succulent
    And then the light abated and "The Dark Lady" was no more

    Her beauty remains a memory and her wisdom is my guide
    I remain waiting to give it all again to "The Dark Lady"
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mrron:
    This is truely a lovely write.
    And this verse.....


    With her feminine wilds demonstrated
    How one woman could have it all
    And offer it to a man
    Who deserved to have it all


    WOW!!!! now that's what Im talkn' about. I very
    much enjoyed this read.


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was passion in a mix love this joint here
     
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    C'est excellente! This reminds me of the Black version of "Lady In Red". Wow I see you have a passionate side; goes great with unmatched wisdom:spinstar:

    :terrific:

    :picture:
     
  5. robboy2003

    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Somebody said something about pasion? What cha talking about here?

    Loved it! Great writ!:hearts4: :great:
     
  6. mrron

    mrron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks you guys

    Thanks to all for the positive comments, yours too Spicybrown. Maybe I should spend more time in this section. I have been a poet for about twenty years, and have had two books published. I do like the warm comments here. Thanks again
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a way with words, so eloquent, you posed this vision so vividly. Much enjoyed poet.
     
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