Black Poetry : The Curtain Close

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jul 18, 2003.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like the style of this....very nice...
     
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    tru indeed
    it beez like that sometimes

    love's hollow husk
    has withered away too dust
    our mechanical motions
    have started to rust
    nolonger standing is even lust
    we both don't care anymore
    we don't fight we don't cuss
    stagnated
    our love is castrated
    nolonger able to reproduce
    so i just sit here with you
    further constricting our love's noose

    very very nice gurl
    i can identify...mos def
    let da rain come down....
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes !! so true
    love the way u posed this
     
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    Take a bow,
    That was very expressive,
    nice flow to it.
     
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    I agree...Girl take a bow on this one.

    "Our house, no longer a home
    Your arms, no longer a haven"

    This was deeply felt right here!!
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey angelicsage,

    WOW!! As they said before take a bow and then another one!!

    This was beautifully expressed!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Emotionally stirring and softly expressed with the force of time itself,my Sage.

    Your Oracle sees all and hears even more.
     
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    Our house, no longer a home
    Your arms, no longer a haven
    Neither one wants to be the first to go
    We merely act within our roles - angelicsage

    This says it all, I love it!
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely, Thank you and yes it is somewhat of a varied flow, little different from the norm.


    Khasm, Always love it when you flow on the page and yes
    "Let the rains come down" I see we were sharing somewhat of
    the same "sentiment" in flow. Thank you!


    Rich, Thank you and yes much "truth" posed here.


    Alize, glad you were feelin me on this, u know u my girl.
    Much luv to u


    Sierra, our "poet of the week" it's an honor to have you on the
    page and thank you, I think I will take my bow now...
    Much luv, Angeli


    Quinessential1.......
    Your words are always so deep............with the force of time itself.
    Maybe one day the Oracle will reveal
    Much luv, Your Sage


    1poet, always a pleasure to receive kind words from a poet such
    as yourself...Much respect, Angelic!
     
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