Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jul 18, 2003.
i like the style of this....very nice...
it beez like that sometimes
love's hollow husk
has withered away too dust
our mechanical motions
have started to rust
nolonger standing is even lust
we both don't care anymore
we don't fight we don't cuss
our love is castrated
nolonger able to reproduce
so i just sit here with you
further constricting our love's noose
very very nice gurl
i can identify...mos def
let da rain come down....
yes yes yes !! so true
love the way u posed this
Take a bow,
That was very expressive,
nice flow to it.
I agree...Girl take a bow on this one.
"Our house, no longer a home
Your arms, no longer a haven"
This was deeply felt right here!!
WOW!! As they said before take a bow and then another one!!
This was beautifully expressed!!
Emotionally stirring and softly expressed with the force of time itself,my Sage.
Your Oracle sees all and hears even more.
Our house, no longer a home
Your arms, no longer a haven
Neither one wants to be the first to go
We merely act within our roles - angelicsage
This says it all, I love it!
Lovely, Thank you and yes it is somewhat of a varied flow, little different from the norm.
Khasm, Always love it when you flow on the page and yes
"Let the rains come down" I see we were sharing somewhat of
the same "sentiment" in flow. Thank you!
Rich, Thank you and yes much "truth" posed here.
Alize, glad you were feelin me on this, u know u my girl.
Much luv to u
Sierra, our "poet of the week" it's an honor to have you on the
page and thank you, I think I will take my bow now...
Much luv, Angeli
Your words are always so deep............with the force of time itself.
Maybe one day the Oracle will reveal
Much luv, Your Sage
1poet, always a pleasure to receive kind words from a poet such
as yourself...Much respect, Angelic!
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