Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Core

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Aug 23, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is the core
    it's the inner most feeling
    it's the stuff dreams are made of
    and sends emotions reeling
    It's the first blossom of Spring
    It's a baby's first breath
    It's when I first realized
    that we won't part even at death
    because at the center of it all
    is my heart. Bruised and battered
    yes, but still whole. And I thought
    that to have another love, never mattered,
    but it does in more ways than I can logically
    express...But that's ok, love doesn't have to
    make sense, it just is. It happens sometimes
    when you least expect it. It enwraps you,
    blanketing you, so tightly that it's hard to breath
    at first, and then you learn that love is just holding
    your hand, and that's fine. Just another chapter
    of emotions, experiences, and sharing unfolding
    taking you and me and all our unique nuances,
    of which there are many, and turning the mixture
    into...we. It takes time, I suppose for the ingredients
    to blend just right, to mold a solid fixture.
    Constructing the foundation of a relationship
    that will withstand the test of time. So many deep sighs
    as I inhale and exhale this still evolving spirit,
    acknowledging the whims and the whys
    of it all. And what will become of this.
    For this is the core
    It's the innermost feeling
    It is love...and more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow deep scribe of feelings , vision & emotions
    to twist into a love splat .......nice creation poeticly sprayed
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very creative..really enjoyed this one
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you enjoyed this creation Rich, your kind words are much appreciated.
    Mzblkangel, good to know you enjoyed this one, thank you.
     
  5. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :crying:

    Oh that was bee-yoo-tee-ful!

    My :heart: swells reading this.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting me know this touched you so toylin.
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eh, anytime.
     
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    Sweet, sweet flow - lovin the sentiments and the way you dropped it, sister. You're the bomb.
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now gempis, such words are much appreciated from a creative poet such as yourself. Thank you.
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    When my day seems long
    and I'm not feeling my
    usually self.

    It always a pleasure
    to read the treasures
    off your shelf!!!

    Beautiful Scribe Sis!!!!
     
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