Black Poetry : The Conversation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Jun 18, 2002.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Conversation

    The study of rap has been some cruddy crap got a buddy
    Ready to snap with a gat naw don’t do it kid you’ll be in muddy
    Water but MADD I have no choice he said it with a sad voice
    Why? Well my girl gone and it’s a sad world dog gone no remorse
    Forced at home to listen to a divorce song **** kid that
    Of course is wrong the source is a strong grand slam with no bat
    Hell I’m being compel to ring the bell throw in the towel
    MADD you know this not my style frustration loosen my bowels
    So I school on the toilet stool and drool like a fool problem compiles
    Like trash in a dumpter I’m smash as a youngster it’s in my files
    Like bad credit on a computer pop on the screen and slop up the scene
    Like porno flicks about chicks and tricks make me sick and mean
    Like Samson I’m handsome girls wold pay ransom for this body
    Dancing at the party and glancing drink barcardi
    Dense in the brain as you recall, now I’m up against the wall
    Tense and ready to fall, debt increase threats don’t cease at all
    MADD better yet who I’m gonna call? My bank loan stall
    Dawg try Jenny May they have a plenty to say about money
    Loan but MADD my honey not home if I call them now it’ll look funny
    Dummy to do that at this point they won’t anoint my troubles
    Must change my policy results is strange quality in doubles
    Social pressures hindering me from local pleasures must take
    Global measures to find an answer to this blind cancer make
    My nosebleed, don’t have many plans, owe twenty grand on my van
    Need doe or bread in my hand the arithmetic is sick man don’t understand
    Under obligation is a thunder situation now plunders with complication
    Blunder in conversation, face car repossession a scar and a disgrace
    In this profession, yeah kid I feel ya

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD if i hit this a thousand times, it wouldn't be enough peep...

    flow is rediculous tyte...
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiahTHANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL YO TOOK A LITTLE TIME TO WRITE THIS
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD

    I was listening to 2pac this morning on the way in to the job, man you done made me go back to my car and get my cd. Now I'm in this office rappin along with you and him... I can dig this especially the last three lines. Go one then I know you gone drop something on the Online poetry jam...... Right????




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  5. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see u still doing yo thang Madd..

    Always a pleasure to read Bruh...Keep da flow!! Ya dig!!
    Much love!!
     
  6. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that flow was smooth as good liquer with ice in it! i love the metaphors and the style you used. Much respect ma brotha!
     
  7. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My hip hop hero poet brotha man......

    loving what you be doing up in heah! mos def :heart:

    Shade
     
  8. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UbZoRbShUn, Rashad and midnightsson thanks for your comments for real enjoyed them for real yo got keep on dropping this stuff yall
     
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