Black Poetry : The Conversation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, May 16, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummm excuse me
    I hesitate to even ask
    But

    Would you mind if I

    Sigh

    Let me start again

    My name is...

    I saw you standing there and I

    This isn't coming out right

    Forgive me for stuttering

    But the sight of you seems

    To have me at a loss for words

    What I am trying so hard to say

    Is

    I saw you standing there and

    Well

    Can I get to know you?

    I mean

    I know we just met and all

    But I caught your scent in the air

    And my knees went week

    That doesn't always happen

    So I figured, I would take the chance and see if

    You felt the same

    I feel connected to you somehow

    Like I've known you forever...

    Wow

    Ok

    That was a mouth full

    Now that I have completley embarrassed myself

    I ask again

    Can I get to know you?



    Natasha
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes you can get to know me
    but, remember
    "A closed mouth don't get fed"
    so, don't be afraid to
    talk to me
    or you may remain hungry
    so let me nourish you a little
    Hi, my name is Blakverb, blak for short"
    So Miss Stutter or should I
    be synonymous and say
    "Miss Stammer" /
    it's cool the nerves got your words locked
    in lapses but I dig your grammer
    smoothe like...like...like...like
    chocolate rivers flowing over a
    marshmallow cliff and I...I...I...my
    aural sweet tooth is satisfied
    by your confection coated conversation
    and the scent you caught in the air,
    Romance, by Ralph Lauren
    it describes me best and................
    I'll catch you if your knees get too weak
    and carry you over the threshold to
    platinum pleasures where diamonds
    will embed themselves in your skin
    and we'll nickname you "Tiffany"

    We've known each other longer than "forever"
    maybe "Seven"ever aka infinity tangilble epiphany
    close your eyes....what do you see? Blak...Turn off
    your lights when you sleep at night, what holds you?
    Blak....The intro to your dreams what color is it? Blak...
    The skin that holds your naked soul? blak...The arms you
    implicitly ask to hold you? Blak....

    Thoughts of ME

    "Blak-thoughts"

    cloaking you in blak satin

    under blaklight while we

    dance at our private

    blak-ball...let's...Oh...

    I'm sorry we just met...



    Your piece was tight queen. keep scribin'

    one love,blak
     
  3. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um...we...um...

    this was too cute!!!

    8th!
     
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