Spoken Word : ...the conversation kiss.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Apr 21, 2002.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 the 1... who didn't believe that i was real-ly going to do this! :tongue:
     
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    <materializes>

    Talk about deep conversation! Ms Sunshyne, I really love this piece! Whew, especially since I have had some conversations like that. Very smooth and calulating, nice and so precise! Your delivery added to the effect and enhanced your words. I like the way you use the conversation as a metaphor for a kiss, elaborating on how it moved U and made you react. I gotta listen to it again because I think I missed something.

    <disappears>
     
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    I don't have to say nuttin' cause you already know!!!!

    :heart:
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    well now !! hummmm! look at u gurl ........
     
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    Very, very nice Sunshyne.
    Love the comparison and the use of "Euphorically" lol.
    Great work.
    *Emma*
     
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    AlwaysThank.



    ...you guys are soooo sweet!! :D

    thanks for listening!! glad you liked it!!

    itsallLove...
    elayne.
     
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    YEAH!!! DA KISS OF CONVO
     
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    whu!

    this was off the chain

    :x: back at cha :lol:

    pdiddy
     
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    $$RICH$$ ...you are so funny sometimes!! :lol:
    thanks for coming back again!! i appreciate cha! :heart:

    PeeDidDee ...well! i'm glad you enjoyed it!! :D
    when are you gonna post one of these thangz??
    if i did it... errybody should chile! :lol: thanks again!
     
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    KISS ME BABY LIKE U NEVER KISSED BEFORE !! WOOOOWEEEE!!
    I CAN'T LET GO OF DIS
     
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