Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Jan 1, 2002.
THE POSE U HOLD
DA LOVE UNDER YA RAYZ
MOST OF ALL
MOST DEF A POET..! LUV YA
the most powerful kiss
has to be when lips move, never touching skin....
such a wonderful prelude to tactile loving....tantric expression....
speak sis, and welcome back!
I know exactly how you must have felt during your 3 to 4 month lull when the question comes to you about writing poetry & your experiences .... and how you seem to kind of hit peak or something strange just happens & things don't come to you so easily for one reason or another.... I was going through this myself over the past few months myself......!!
Let me say sistah..... This piece is truly YOU, and speaks volumes, it is a wonderfully written scribe.
Glad to see you back representin'!
Ahhhhhhh...it is refreshing to see you back doing what you do best...LOVE...this is a heck of a way to make a comeback, then again, a "comeback" means you faded from grace the first time and you didn't do that...let's just say you took a vacation from writing tight works. That's it...you've been reading my mind see there is "power" in absence (i hope that wasn't to heavy for you) and you wanted everyone to wonder "where is the love?"
glad to see you're back sister
your hiatus was time for the seed of inspiration to grow and blossom. We do sometimes go through a "dry spell" but this is when we are being polished and prepared to go into a deeper walk with poetry...
this piece is beautiful and your words always leave me lost for comments. i missed your voice and i am glad to see that you have not given in to those lies that you are not a poet...
remember...your gift will make room. you are a poet, an artist of linguistics. be strengthened by your craft and your craft will cover you...
Always watching from the meadow and i smile today to see that your rays have returned to shine through the clouds...
"he conversation kissed me"
you know how I feel bout this one here. I am glad that you are shinin' ya rayz once again. vacations are need by all and when we retire to gardens, take flight or whatever the case may be, we always come back rejuvinated. You can never loose what's rightfully yours. Like brotha D said polish and watch it Shyne.....
Beautiful Black People!!!
hmmm... wonda how i knew exact-ly who would
show me love on this piece?? altho everybody &
they mama done read it!! (LOL) probably...
'cause you're the same people who ALWAYS
showed me love!! Thank You All... a sistah needed
i would call each of you by name... but! i hope you
know how i feel about cha!
i see the sun shyne...
i concur with the rest.... this is what we've been missin' all o' dese months.
don't do it again!!!
cut the drama
you know you got love
and you got talent
why cause i said so
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