Black Poetry : The Connection (Part 1)

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Friend to lovers
    My baby
    My love sweet love
    My midnight King
    I welcome you
    Into my world

    On clouds we ride
    Pass the orbs
    Beyond the galaxy
    As we touch our
    Destiny made for us
    Here it is….
    As the covers unwrap
    Soul to soul
    And confirms us….
    Unsearched and defined
    Passion moves through the air
    As we glide the sheets
    Not on a one night stand
    No more, lust
    But a divine trust
    As we lock in motion
    And emotions greet
    Into a rapture
    We are both captured in
    Envision of reality
    The wonders of….us
    As we, both collect our treasure
    Of delightful pleasure
    For you became a part of me
    As my spirit pours into yours.
    A insatiable of……
    Our bodies floating on
    High praises as we reach
    Our ultimate joy
    Within this…night
    Inside the heavens bells ring
    Listen to the Angels sing
    As this movement
    Changes the winds
    Moves the sky
    As the moon takes a bow
    The staz celebrate
    No more searching
    Just reaching
    Holding, swaying
    Uniting in one
    And vision playing
    Becomes manifest
    Soul to soul
    Spirit to spirit
    Mentally touched
    Within a stimulation
    Connection

    (C) 2005
    ROSE~FIRE
    ANTHOLOGY of One Woman’s Heart
    By An Angel
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful piece, there's so much beauty inside of you...
    that, anyone you make that "connection" with...must be a very special one.
    this was greatly posed, and I enjoyed reading it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    connecting spirits bring a love divine and souls
    cascade in rapture of such beauty surely this
    was felt within and i'm into it whewwwwww!!!!!!!!
    sheer beauty
     
  4. caramelpython

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    :grouphug: Nice connection on thoughts n feeelings MBA...I like it I like it and Mikey didn't have to try it out 1st for me to know! :gossip:
     
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    MzAngel girl I liked this alot there is so much talent spread around in here that I just might have to spend a whloe day reading everyones drops. This inspired me in a most unique way.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana..thank you momma QT for all your wisdom and kind words Happy you enjoyed...

    $$RICH$$...I know you know what i be iz saying...it takes alot more to hold a relationship together..a greater love must be recieved by both...happy you enjoyed look for part 2

    caramelpython..i know you know...Micky cant even get close to knowing of the known...ya feel me? thanks for all the love and support

    soulful2006..thank you for your kind words...


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho u right .....with good will & faith the connection is made
    looking to pt.2
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MBA

    This is piece is written with so much tranquility and love...with the feeling of heaven.

    You're good...you're very good. :wink:

    :toast:
     
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