Black Short Stories : The Coming!

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  1. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Coming!

    She knew she must stop some time, but that time was not now she enjoyed it to much, the rush was like a diamond thrown on her belly and she was in awe of its magic.
    As she gathered her bag and looked in the mirror to survey her look, she practiced, hazel eyes rimmed in black glistened back at her to give the approval of her mission.
    Tossing the door back with a gentle sway of her feminine gun, she laughed as the familar click, brought her to the gray mercedes she had prayed for and worked for, for years.
    Sticking the key in the ignition and feeling her warm butt against the soft leather always made her reach for her sunglasses, first the emblem of "Guess" made her smile, then the reflection taunted her with its shameful beauty.
    Gliding into traffic, she knew the time was upon her she could no longer deny herself what she had started .
    Plans was to win at any cost .
    So she was black and the world wanted to treat her like some wifey-babymachine, not her, not now, not never.
    Men, they thought the owned the world, well they could have whatever part she had'nt claimed.
    Walking toward the familar building she felt what she always felt, adrenalin rush and flow, and black womens blood screamed until she was ready to work.
    He opened the door with undisirable readiness, grabbing her arm to silence her mouth with a soulful kiss, deep and pulsating.
    Adding to her motion was the fierce realization of his toy, throbbing against the thin fabric of her dress, angry and oppressd, almost bursting with anticipated disire.
    She laughed that deep throaty laugh deep in her throat as she preceded to rid him of his torture, eyes ablaze and tears threating to envelop him he groaned his release with fury until her spasms turned into laughter, the sound of her laugh always made his climax so much stronger and he always felt the need to grab her and lay her sleek form across his chest as he grasped for breath.
    Feeling her gentle kisses massage his body all over made him eat all the things he had said about her lateness, he knew he was in trouble, she was incredible.
    I can't let a woman do this to me, he said and shuddered when he felt her take all of his toy in the soft folds of her mouth to play alittle further.
    Sliding down until he felt his thighs being tongue bathed in beauty, he always screamed when she reached his toes to languish all pleasure into them and swipe at his relaxed manhood with ticklish licks.
    He watched her as she put on one of the robes he had bought for her, a cream silk that made her look like some tv model.
    She walked in the kitchen, knowing what time it was and she liked this part, opening a bottle of champayne at 10:00 in the morning was like a reward for work done.
    She popped the cork and took a healthy drink from the neck, before she poured some into 2 beautiful crystal stemed glasses.
    She walked ever so slowly toward his quiet form, laying against the bed, naked and eyes closed she leant over and spilled the champayne against his lips, tasting the liguid with her own full lips until he felt his toy grow with ferocity.
    She was quick to point out that she would see him next week, waiting patiently for him to say what she wanted to hear.
    Double or Nothing.
    The Sounds that escaped her was not pleasurable as he demanded his money in full, it only made her strong as she showed him he could have her anyway he wanted without so much as a wimper, without so much as a cry she showered and dressed and left a long delicous kiss upon his soul.
    As the sun brazed itself against the sky, she slipped the 2,000 dollars check in her Coach Bag and headed home to make some cookies for the Home.
    The Home, she loved being there taking care of all the disavanted people who couldnt help themselves, and she still didnt no how there kids could leave them behind.
    She pulled in and noticed a u-haul truck was in the way of her parking space, she was not in the mood for this she needed to shower on more time in the privacy of her tub, before she became Alexis.
    She stiffly walked past the truck and noticed a male form staring at her from across the next landing, whatever, she thought to herself.
    As she let her self in her apartment she wondered why her heart was beating so fast, and all thought went to the stranger that looked right at her as if her knew her.
    Please she thought to herself, probably some brother moving in with one of these white sistas.
    They sure was standing around with there light blue halters, why do they always want light blue.
    Oops, forgot to match their eyes.
    Well enough of that i have things to do!:love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice story .........let it continue
     
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    i like the writing style, and the story was very entertaining! thanx for sharing this gem!
     
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    Intrigued... continue on, please.
     
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    nice read...continue on please
     
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    reading this one again i really love
    da story within this one
     
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    Hummmm

    ;) ;) ;)
     
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    pt.2 please loving the story
     
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