Black Short Stories : The Coming-Part 2

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  1. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Holding her hand against her beating heart, she slipped out of the clothes that seemed to cling to her beautiful frame and looking at herself in her bathroom mirror as she wrapped the towel around her hair, and then to toss it on the hamper as she turned the taps of her shower and walked naked to the kitchen waiting for the water to be just right.
    opening her fridge and grabbing some ham slices and some pepperjack cheese against some wheat bread, she devored it with easy bites, looking at the cover of her favorite magazine essence and thought to herself she would have to look at that later on tonight when she was in bed.
    Seeing the mist of the shower beckoning her she slipped slowly in, and felt the rush of the water invade her soul as it stripped all of the days thoughts out of her mind to play havoc with her hair and dance upon her skin until she felt cleansed and pure.
    She knew she was hers and that was the only thing that mattered to her, she would never give her heart to another, never.
    She leaned against the back of the shower and closed her eyes and allowed her mind to unwind and become serene, gently stripping herself of all the things Mia had done and feeling Alexis come to the fore with radiance and welcome.
    Stepping out of the shower and turning of the taps she almost slid on the tiled floor and smiled to herself, yes alexis was here .
    Mia Alexis Kingsley and no she wasnt a basket case, she was totally in charge here and would always be.
    Rubbing her body until she could feel the dryness of her skin made her reach for her prized lotion, victoria's secrets peach, oh how she loved the smell of this and languishly layered it on until she could see her skin shine beneath the lotion, dressing in jeans and a white t, that moulded her breasts against the white cotton she wrapped her hair in a ponytail laughing at its rebellious curls and tightened it in a unsweep in the back of her head.
    kicking on some old clogs, she finally walked towards the livingroom and clicked on the answering machine, walking away as she heard the familar sound of her many beggars and tossed her head and clicked off the annoying little device.
    Walking into the cream colored kitchen with its walls incased in the most prettiest borders, thats why she had bought the place it was in immacalute condition and she hadnt changed a thing, just stocked up on all the necessary kitchen utensils walmart had to offer, Cookies oh she loved baking and it made her think and she always made her best decsions with cookie batter on her tongue.
    She would need about 3 dozen for the home, maybe four the way old mr. forest ate them last time, and started on her project, glad she had picked up some extra walnuts and had just put the first batch in when she heard a knock on her door, she froze for a minute no one had ever knocked on her door, hell no one even knew her address, who could it be she thought to herself as she took a second look at her cookies and walked to the door, looking out the little pane glass she couldnt believe her eyes and then her heart jumped inside her chest and then she felt mad, what the hell she thought as she flung the door ajar, '' Yes she said and stood transfixed as the tall masculine brother with the wide smile on his face and all the white teeth said, hello i just wanted to apologize for putting my uhaul in your space i hope it wasnt to much of a inconvience for you.
    She just stood there and felt the anger rushing to her everybeing, what a brother will do and say to get some booty.
    She looked him in the face and said; Dont let it happen again and slammed the door in his face before he could make a retort ,that should put a stop to it, thats all i need is a beggar on the premises, and went to see about her **** cookies.
    Grabbing the phone and putting the final touches to the last batch, wrapping them in clear foil on some dollar store aluminum plates that she found to be very cute for just this and a dollar she said hello, and welcomed her friend and coworker natalie, Hey girl, natalie said and she answered the same hey, she had become friends with natalie young two years ago when she first came to the city and she had helped her get the job at the home, natalie loved the home maybe even more than her, her father had been a resident there and natalie practically lived there and they hired her after her father died last year, Whats up, she said, oh just put the fininshing touches to my cookies and about to head over,:natalie said, oh okay well can you put a foot on it because mrs clawson asking for ya, and i need some help with a couple of rooms, we lost one last night, oh she said who, and held her breath she loved all of them please she thought not mrs winchester :run:
     
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    could be Mrs. Winchester this what i'm talking bout wow
    loving this story and how it's unfolding .....continue please!
     
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    this is like a good movie im a year too young to watch. lol, come on girl part III!!!!!!!!
     
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    yes indeed getting really good pt.3 please !!!!!!
     
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