Black Poetry : The Comeback

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Comeback

    Thirsting large for a bursting charge so yall pass the fireworks
    Wanna retire jerks blind this require alert minds, a liar get merked
    Rip teams and crews by means of fuze explode on this road
    With a load of rhyme codes so pass the dynamite this episode
    Will blast tonight this is my last fight like a lamp I’ve glowed
    My dome is rough and strong enough to resist a brisk attack
    Of whack criticism, facts and wisdom available and on track
    Some MC’S are built firm like a Chinese silkworm not whack
    Use insecticides on rap butterflies that don’t suck from my bloom
    Duck or be killed and doomed by these hotshot sprays that fill your room
    Rip out testicles at festivals castorate those with hate flows
    So hand me a knife yall understand strife? I cut off toes
    Crush scum on the carpet and bomb them targets like B52’s
    So I use navigation to unravel a nation of misfits paying shifty dues
    This is a demonstration of flame intimidation lame with them drifty blues
    So pass BB King’s guitar, play a tune like CC Rider a legit star
    Clutch spines and touch minds with such designs that’ll knock Calvin Klein ajar
    So like Genuwine see fine girls in them jeans lips on a juicy coo-chee
    Fat and poking out smoking no doubt while stroking yell and shout groo-vee
    My baby boo-bee lady you move me so let me buy a rubber try discover
    Some sex in this after a complex kiss turn the mattress into wet blubber

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woooo feelin this...I like the las line...flow on...God Bless
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man MADD u popped a masterpiece out
    love da flow bruh
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BaduX AND $$RICH$$ THANKS FOR THE REPLIES FOR REAL YALL MADE MY DAY GOT KEEP ON DROPPING
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bring it on coz i be lovin ya flava
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tight...i heard music the whole time i was reading it...loved it.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL TRY KEEP DROPPING
     
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