Black Poetry : the cold windy night that is...

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am

    the cold windy night that is
    the absence of a warm embrace

    the lack thereof

    of

    us. How pre-tell
    did i become such?
    i an instant that seemed like years

    i let love erode
    the thought of affection and
    ardor perished from my one tracked mind.

    I became the breeze.
    cold and unforgiving

    elementary in though

    my sound mind unwound
    due to pressure and time
    and the relationship that bind-ed
    my mind to actions that slowly became
    accinine--

    yet she gave her all.
    is it fair?

    no.

    is life?

    neither is that
    cold, windy night.


    (anotherhasmyheart)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cold storms of life
    to love in a lost tomb
    one's heart now belong
    to another

    tyte scribe
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte...i like it...
     
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    Hey ThePoetSean ... :wave: ... you know i wanna hear this ... right?? :wink:

    A Sister recently joined us, here on the forum and in voice chat. She said you invited her. I can't think of her name, gosh gosh gosh ... but she currently resides in Germany. Hmmmm ... anyway ... she read some very nice poetry on the mic ... had the Brothers wanting to carpool to Germany! :)

    Love you ... thanks for this beautiful peace.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    (the cold windy night that is
    the absence of a warm embrace
    the lack thereof)
    This piece was a great depiction of how the erosion of love can really be. Nice piece.
     
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    wonderful..the feeling of that inner expression..oh this is nice
    Peace
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lost in a moment

    just then

    i got lost in a moment
    that i can't
    leave

    stagnant
    all because
    I didn't want to move forward
    all because i was afraid of future breaths.

    All because i was scared.
    Love is progression.
    Love is growth.
    LOVE
    is preserverence

    --------]Love is

    Living

    Ostentatiously and

    Vicariously thru that one you want for

    Eternity

    it's not about being lost.
    not about a rut or stagnance
    it's not about fear.

    whit that in mind...
    and in this moment...

    how could i love you?
    how could you lead youself to believe that we
    are moving forward?
    how could you think that THIS
    could cause more good than pain?

    she's like i was...


    just then...


    lost in a moment
    a moment she can't
    get out of.




    (whoami?)
    (latelyithasbeenaquestionthatican'tanswer)

    ???(identity-less yet-in-still)???.revisited
     
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    word...brotha dat was deep
    peace
    khasm
     
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    That was deeeeep, with a million e's. I esp liked your second post, love is living ostentatiously...so true. Never looked at it that way. Yet somehow love will do what it wants to do, stop or move...you canNOT choose.
     
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    Yo this was truly deeply felt.
    You really touched my heart.
    Keep scribing.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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