Black Poetry : The Circle of life...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Murdoc, Oct 7, 2003.

  1. Murdoc

    Murdoc Member MEMBER

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    Funny how when you start to write it becomes an addiction and everything inspires you, i love that i have found this inspiration, anyhow here is the 2nd peice i have ever writen, enjoy...





    Life, funny how it works out, the circle of life, the smiles the tears the friendships its great. Makes you wonder what's next to come. Like a great novel just waiting for the next turn of events. Sometimes a wrong turn can be rectified so never regret, hate or judge. Never judge a person or an event because that event or person that brought you pain or sadness could be bring you joy laughter and bliss. A week, a month a decade, you will never know if it will come but if it does it will make you realize that your kindness can bring joy and inspiration to another and that's the highest blessing you could give to anyone...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow ya right kindness and lovin from heart
    will make another feel da joy and on going power to
    continue .....i like dis

    when we sho love in support we grow in bond closer
    and become united .....thanks for dis flow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    circle of life...
    what can i say..
    ya got yea happy
    sad
    excited
    bliss
    and then your blessings...
    going with love...
    what a chain react...
    i like your little piece here..
    its cool...
    just an Angel's view...
     
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    tru indeed...
    neva judge...
    thas only for the most high....word
    keep scribe'n
    peace
    khasm
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is true indeed....
    and yes once you start to write
    everything inspires...first, there's
    a little drip and then the **** breaks
    and there's a flood...

    so I'll be looking for more from you!
     
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    you are so on point
    with this scribe..
    i feel the same
    good one here
    Peace
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes inspiration of the poetic inclination is something beautiful :)
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your last line is so so so true...and i'm honored to be one of the people reading the 2nd piece you've ever written. much love to you and keep it flowin'.
     
  9. Murdoc

    Murdoc Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all. This writing stuff is crazy i didnt know i could feel this way..
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A great inspirational message, thanks!
     
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