Black Poetry : The Chocolate Lady (Bishops challenge)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Aug 4, 2003.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are those that
    deserve to be edified
    held before the Heavens
    while gently saying "thank you" to the
    Lord

    There are those that
    deserve to be held
    shielded from all that
    ills the world because they
    are angels

    There are those that
    deserve to be called queen
    as they are the example
    when a father tells his
    daugter
    "you are an African queen"

    There are those that
    just need to be admired
    beheld in one's eye
    and just enjoyed for their
    "being" because only God
    could have created them

    This is destee. My Friend. My queen.
    My mother. My sister.


    * Destee "mom",

    Sister this was "off the top" (you know how I sometimes do). I've been around from day one and since then you have inspired me as well as "held down a lovely house" (and you added rooms...lol). I pray that all of the relative new residents can truly understand how "special" you are and the hard work you expend to keep the lights on. You are a real sister, a true sister, a beautiful sister. you'll always have a special place in my heart because you have provided me with an avenue where I can be me. I have nothing but love for you. Enjoy the tributes you are so derserving my sister, my mother, my queen, my friend. We will one day meet and just kick it for "old times sake". If you ever need somethign and I have it. it's yours.

    peace sean aka blakverb
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Oh Blak !!!! :cry: Wow ... this really really really moves my heart so much ... wow ... gosh ... words cannot express how i'm feeling right now ... my heart is full ... my eyes are pouring out the joy that has my cup running over ... wow ... i'm so honored, so blessed, so encouraged ... to have you and these words given to me ... right off the top, like i know you do ... wow ... thank you so much Blak ... i love you

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    this is tight
    and very tru...word
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very heart felt and so true
    this Queen means the world to us all here
    the work
    the time
    the smile
    the caring
    she did it all
     
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    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak one of the veterans...I know this touched her heart...been missing you man...
     
  7. Destee

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    Blak !!!!! :love: ... it's me again !!! :) ... Blak, i hope you don't mind, but i'm gonna be reading this peace tonight during the Poetry Throwdown - Flow'n on da ********!!! - i wish you could be there reading it to me, oohhh wouldn't that be nice :love: but in lieu of that, i will be reading you to me and everyone within the sound of my voice ... i'm sure you won't mind ... i hope you won't mind ... love you so very much ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Blak ... just a note to let you know that i read you on the mic last night and you sounded deep dark beautifully chocolate !!!! mmmmmm ... *sigh* ... simply delicious ... thank youuuu ... :) ... oohhh wait ... i was looking at your pic ... uuhhhh ... i mean ... your poetry on the mic was sooo moving ... thank you my dear darling Brother!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    hi
    yes this is a wonderful flow
    Destee read it last night on the
    open mic..
    wonderful..lovely
    Peace
     
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